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Expand Up @@ -38,8 +38,9 @@ stream. Thus, Video allows authors to write videos in a
similar fashion to how LaTeX enables authors to write
documents.

All VidLang programs begin with @code{#lang video}, the
remaining program is a description of the resulting video.
All VidLang programs begin with the language declaration @code{#lang video}; and the
remaining program below is a description of the resulting video, written in expressions.
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I would change this to be:

remaining program is a description of the resulting video.

Because:

  1. What does 'above' have to do with anything?
  2. A Video program is more than just expressions.

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It was an attempt to introduce "expressions" in the paragraph below. I wasn't sure if the program only contained expressions or not.

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I see. Honestly, I think that expressions should evaluate to producers deserves its own sentence.

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Go for it.


Each top level expression is a @deftech["producer"] which is
anything that produces a video stream. For example, the
@racket[color] producer generates a stream of green frames:
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