Skip to content
New issue

Have a question about this project? Sign up for a free GitHub account to open an issue and contact its maintainers and the community.

By clicking “Sign up for GitHub”, you agree to our terms of service and privacy statement. We’ll occasionally send you account related emails.

Already on GitHub? Sign in to your account

Procedural Hangman Assignment #5

Open
wants to merge 3 commits into
base: master
Choose a base branch
from

Conversation

braidsencurls
Copy link

for review

Copy link

@cheeyim cheeyim left a comment

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

great effort @braidsencurls ! Just noticed there are some data structure/looping and best practices you'll need to familiarize yourself with.. don't worry, it'll come as you practice more... do check out google python style guide - https://github.com/google/styleguide/blob/gh-pages/pyguide.md



def _get_random_word(list_of_words):
pass
if len(list_of_words) != 0:
Copy link

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

for sequences (strings, lists, tuples), use the fact that empty sequences are false, so if list_of_words is preferable to if len(list_of_words)



def _get_random_word(list_of_words):
pass
if len(list_of_words) != 0:
random_index = randint(0, len(list_of_words)-1)
Copy link

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

you may simply return random.choice(list_of_words) ... the choice() method will randomly pick from your list :)
can check out here for documentation - https://docs.python.org/3/library/random.html

if len(list_of_words) != 0:
random_index = randint(0, len(list_of_words)-1)
else:
raise InvalidListOfWordsException()
Copy link

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

it's actually more intuitive to check for abnormalities, then raise the exception and continue with your logic instead of doing it the other way round ...

if not list_of_words:
   raise InvalidListOfWordsException()
#your other logic here



def _mask_word(word):
pass
if word != '':
Copy link

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

similarly, it's preferred to use if word:



def _mask_word(word):
pass
if word != '':
letters_of_word = list(word)
Copy link

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

you don't need to convert string to list .. in python, string is iterable as well.. meaning you can do this..

for letter in word:
     print(letter)



def _uncover_word(answer_word, masked_word, character):
pass


if len(answer_word) == 0:
Copy link

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

prefer to be if not answer_word for False check

raise InvalidWordException()
else:
answer_word = answer_word.lower()
characters = list(answer_word)
Copy link

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

same as above, you do not need to convert string to list to loop through it.. remember, string is technically a "collection of characters" just like list being "collection of items"

def guess_letter(game, letter):
pass
if game['remaining_misses'] == 0 or game['answer_word'].lower() == game['masked_word'].lower():
raise GameFinishedException
if len(list(letter)) > 1:
Copy link

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

if len(letter) > 1:

again, you don't need to convert to list ... everything a collection can do, string should be able to do as well.. cause string is a type of collection too ...

if letter.lower() in game['answer_word'].lower():
game['remaining_misses'] = int(remaining)
else:
game['remaining_misses'] = int(remaining) - 1
Copy link

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

you can use shorthand like game['remaining_misses'] += 1

raise GameFinishedException
if len(list(letter)) > 1:
raise InvalidGuessedLetterException
guesses = game['previous_guesses']
Copy link

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

you don't necessarily need to create variable for game[xxx] so you can safe a few lines of code .. it actually does not save any memory / improve readability ....

Sign up for free to join this conversation on GitHub. Already have an account? Sign in to comment
Labels
None yet
Projects
None yet
Development

Successfully merging this pull request may close these issues.

2 participants