Update schedule

docs/_data/australia-2024-schedule.yaml

@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ talks_day2:
   - duration: '0:05'
     title: '5 minute break'
   - duration: '0:30'
-    slug: toot-your-own-horn-the-benefits-of-keeping-a-brag-doc-theo-harris
+    slug: tips-for-great-review-comments-cameron-shorter
   - duration: '0:10'
     title: '✋ 10 min Q&A'
   - duration: '0:20'