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Extend the ability to publish Registries to IG/AB/TAG #972
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Tiny typo
Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr <[email protected]>
@@ -4702,15 +4702,15 @@ Registry Definitions</h4> | |||
and which is responsible for evaluating whether such requests | |||
satisfy the criteria defined in the [=registry definition=]. | |||
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The [=custodian=] may be the [=Working Group=], the [=Team=], or a delegated entity. | |||
The [=custodian=] may be the initiating [=chartered group|chartered=] or [=elected group=], the [=Team=], or a delegated entity. |
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I think we can simplify this to "[=group=]", no?
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[=group=]
on its own links to a definition that also includes the AC. I don't think the AC should be in the business of publishing anything
@@ -4721,9 +4721,9 @@ Registry Definitions</h4> | |||
<h4 id=reg-pub> | |||
Publishing Registries</h4> | |||
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[=Registries=] can be published either | |||
[=Registries=] can be published by [=chartered group|chartered=] or [=elected groups=] either |
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I think we can just delete the "by" phrase, it's not adding anything.
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To me, this seems like the place in the Process which establishes who can publish a Registry. The alternative is line 3018, but that feels more like a reference to something established elsewhere than the place that establishes it.
as a stand-alone [=technical report=] on the [=Registry Track=] called a <dfn>registry report</dfn>, | ||
or incorporated as part of a [=Recommendation=] as an <dfn oldids="registry-section">embedded registry</dfn>. | ||
or, in the case of [=Working Groups=], incorporated as part of a [=Recommendation=] as an <dfn oldids="registry-section">embedded registry</dfn>. |
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or, in the case of [=Working Groups=], incorporated as part of a [=Recommendation=] as an <dfn oldids="registry-section">embedded registry</dfn>. | |
or, in the case of those owned by [=Working Groups=], | |
incorporated as part of a [=Recommendation=] as an <dfn oldids="registry-section">embedded registry</dfn>. |
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in the case of
is usually more words than necessary. I try to eliminate it whenever I see it.
or, in the case of [=Working Groups=], incorporated as part of a [=Recommendation=] as an <dfn oldids="registry-section">embedded registry</dfn>. | |
or, for [=Working Groups=], incorporated into a [=Recommendation=] | |
as an <dfn oldids="registry-section">embedded registry</dfn>. |
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Indirectly, I think which phrasing we pick here kind of depends on what we do on line 4727: depending on how we right the two parts of this contrast, we might suggest that doing a registry in a REC is the only way for WGs to do it, while we actually want to say that only WGs have the ability to do so, but that they can also do it standalone like everyone else.
Such [=registry changes=] do not trigger new [=Advisory Committee Reviews=], | ||
nor Exclusion Opportunities, | ||
and do not require verification via an [=update request=], | ||
even for [=technical reports=] at maturities where this would normally be expected. | ||
Such publications can be made | ||
even in the absence of a [=Working Group=] chartered to maintain the registry | ||
even in the absence of a group chartered to maintain the registry |
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even in the absence of a group chartered to maintain the registry | |
even in the absence of a [=group=] chartered to maintain the registry |
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[=groups=]
also refers to the AB, TAG, and AC, which I don't think is appropriate in the context of this sentense
when the [=custodian=] is another entity. | ||
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Note: The custodian is only empowered to make [=registry changes=]. | ||
If the Working Group establishing the registry wishes | ||
If the [=chartered group|chartered=] or [=elected group=] establishing the registry wishes |
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If the [=chartered group|chartered=] or [=elected group=] establishing the registry wishes | |
If the [=group=] establishing the registry wishes |
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Ok with dropping to group, but I don't think the hyperlinking helps
Co-authored-by: fantasai <[email protected]>
See #902
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