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6 changes: 4 additions & 2 deletions docs/home/data-privacy-details.md
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# Data Privacy

Run:ai [SaaS Cluster installation](../admin/runai-setup/installation-types.md) uses the Run:ai cloud as its control plane. The cluster sends information to the cloud for the purpose of control as well as dashboards. The document below is a run-down of the data that is being sent to the Run:ai cloud.
Run:ai [SaaS Cluster installation](../admin/runai-setup/installation-types.md) uses the Run:ai cloud as its control plane. The cluster sends information to the cloud for control as well as analytics. The document below is a run-down of the data that is being sent to the Run:ai cloud.
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| Asset | Data Details |
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| Asset | Data Details |
| Asset | Data Details |

|---------|---------------|
| Job Metrics | Job names, CPU, GPU, and Memory metrics, parameters sent using the `runai submit` command |
| Workload Metrics | Workload names, CPU, GPU, and Memory metrics, parameters sent using the `runai submit` command |
| Workload Assets | Workload [Assets](../Researcher/user-interface/workspaces/blocks/building-blocks.md) such as environments, compute resources and data resoruces |
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| Resource Credentials | [Credentials](../admin/admin-ui-setup/credentials-setup.md) to cluster resources are stored and encrypted using a SHA-512 algorithm. The encryption is tenant-specific |
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| Node Metrics | Node names and IPs, CPU, GPU, and Memory metrics |
| Cluster Metrics | Cluster names, CPU, GPU, and Memory metrics |
| Projects & Departments | Names, quota information |
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- 'Interactive Workloads' : 'developer/cluster-api/reference/interactive.md'
- 'Distributed Training Workloads' : 'developer/cluster-api/reference/distributed.md'
- 'Inference Workloads' : 'developer/cluster-api/reference/inference.md'
- 'Administrator API' : 'developer/admin-rest-api/overview.md'
- 'Control Plane API' : 'developer/admin-rest-api/overview.md'
- 'Metrics API' :
- 'Metrics' : 'developer/metrics/metrics.md'
- 'Deprecated APIs' :
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