Update and Correct Grammar, Spelling, and Internal Consistency (Mega Thread) #28
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Sam-Cordry
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5.D.2.F.2 - Capitalize rooms |
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Member is sometimes capitalized, sometimes not. |
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Capitalize Alumni in Bad Standing in 4.C.2. |
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Director isn't always capitalized. |
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Directorship isn't always capitalized. |
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House Meeting(s) isn't always capitalized. |
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Weird formatting between 5.D.2.A.4 sections. |
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Semester isn't always capitalized. |
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Weird formatting between 5.D.2.C.1 sections. |
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Should conditional be capitalized? |
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Should Alumni Member in good standing be capitalized as it's a status in 5.D.2.E? |
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Capitalization issues in 5.D.3.C about types of members. |
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Types of votes aren't always capitalized. |
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Spacing between paragraphs and sections is inconsistent |
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Make sure that there are no bulleted lists. Lists are allowed, but without bullet points. |
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Verify that all reference links are functional. |
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Specifically correct grammar in 4.C.4. |
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Fix tenses (especially) in Judicials (will be, is, may) |
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Consider doing at same time as #13 (reorganizing sections) |
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Keep in mind #16. |
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Make sure 1 sentence per line is upheld. |
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Fix comments to align with changes in the text. |
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[From Robert's Notes] Normalize Language - Use may, must not can |
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[From Robert's Notes] In subsection 4.A.2.A.1.C, remove the two commas in the sentence "Them a simple majority, of attending members, is held on whether or not to accept the person as an Introductory Member." |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 4.B.3, add the word "additionally" to the sentence: Active voting members are [additionally] expected to meet the requirements defined in 4.B.4.A." |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 4.B.5.A, add the word "voluntarily" to the sentence: The Membership Evaluation is responsible for determining those individuals who will have the option to [voluntarily] continue Active Membership in the following year. |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 4.D.3.d, the hyperlink is currently broken and shows as ?? |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 5.A.7.B.b, change "director" to "director(s)" |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 5.A.9.B.a, the hyperlink is currently broken and shows as ?? |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 5.A.9.D.a, Add "any of", "an", and "and 5.A.10" to the sentence: "House may choose to waive [any of] the following subset of Qualifications for [an] Executive Board positions [<- delete s] (defined under 5.A.9 [and 5.A.10]) for all Candidates." |
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[From Robert's Notes] 5.A.9.D.a.c (the line about Social and R&D are the only voting Eboard positions that allow for duels) is not in 5.A.9 (Editor's Note: idk what Robert means here) |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 5.A.9.D.b, potentially change the reference to 5.A.9 to 5.A.10 |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 5.A.11.g, the end of the paragraph has "...shall have their votes redistributed in the same process as a loser in 7.C.3." (Editor's Note: this is funny. we keep) |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 5.C.1.a and 5.C.1.f, the hyperlinks are currently broken and shows as ?? |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 5.F.1.d, the hyperlink is currently broken and shows as ?? |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 6.A.2, change "The Center for Residence Life" to "The Department of Residence Life" in the first sentence. |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 7.C.2, add "total" to sentence: "In a Fractional vote, an option in the vote passes if the number of votes cast for the option exceeds a specified fraction of the [total] Votes Cast, rounded up to the nearest vote." |
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[From Robert's Notes] In 8.A, change "...means of an Executive Board Vote of the remaining members" to "...means of an Executive Board Vote [among] the remaining members." |
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Per 2.C.2, Constitutional Maintainers are expected to
Review changes to the Constitution for grammar, spelling, and internal consistency. This issue will be resolved right before this rewrite is proposed to House in order to make sure that the Constitution is internally consistent and free from spelling and grammar mistakes.The text was updated successfully, but these errors were encountered: