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raspberrypilearning · Jan 7, 2025 · 6b3c3f2 · 6b3c3f2
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diff --git a/en/images/archery-glide-test.png b/en/images/archery-glide-test.png
diff --git a/en/step_2.md b/en/step_2.md
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ In the starter project, you should see a target backdrop and a cross hair sprite
 
 --- task ---
 
-When your game starts, broadcast a message to shoot a new arrow.
+When your game starts, broadcast a message to create a new arrow.
 
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 when green flag clicked
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ set size to (400) %
 
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-Click the green flag to test your game. You should see your arrow get bigger and move to the bottom-left of the stage.
+Click the green flag to test your game. You should see your arrow move to the bottom-left of the stage and get bigger.
 
 ![larger target sprite in bottom left of stage](images/archery-start-test.png)
 
@@ -63,6 +63,4 @@ end
 
 Test your game again, and you should see your arrow move randomly around the stage.
 
-![target in a different position](images/archery-glide-test.png)
-
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diff --git a/en/step_3.md b/en/step_3.md
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 ## Shooting arrows
 
-Now you will code your arrow to shoot when the space bar is pressed.
+Code your arrow to shoot when the space bar is pressed.
 
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@@ -35,9 +35,9 @@ end
 
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-Test your game again. This time, when you press the space bar you should see your arrow get smaller, as if it's moving towards the target.
+Test your game again. 
 
-![target with the cross hair on it](images/archery-animate-test.png)
+This time, when you press the space bar you should see your arrow get smaller, as if it's moving towards the target.
 
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diff --git a/en/step_5.md b/en/step_5.md
@@ -17,5 +17,5 @@ Try our [Sprint](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects/sprint) project wh
 
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-Or, why not try out another [Scratch](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects?software%5B%5D=scratch) project.
+Or, why not try out another [Scratch](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects?software%5B%5D=scratch) project?
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		Or, why not try out another [Scratch](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects?software%5B%5D=scratch) project.
		Or, why not try out another [Scratch](https://projects.raspberrypi.org/en/projects?software%5B%5D=scratch) project?