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tidb-cloud/configure-sql-users.md

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ This document describes how to manage database users and roles using the **SQL U
 
 > **Note:**
 >
-> - The **SQL Users** page is in beta and is only available upon request. To request this feature, click **?** in the lower-right corner of the [TiDB Cloud console](https://tidbcloud.com) and click **Request Support**. Then, fill in "Apply for the SQL Users page" in the **Description** field and click **Send**.
+> - The **SQL Users** page is in beta and is only available upon request. To request this feature, click **?** in the lower-right corner of the [TiDB Cloud console](https://tidbcloud.com) and click **Request Support**. Then, fill in "Apply for the SQL Users page" in the **Description** field and click **Submit**.
 > - Database users and roles are independent of [organization and project users and roles](/tidb-cloud/manage-user-access.md). Database users are used to access databases in a TiDB cluster, while organization and project users are used to access organizations and projects in the [TiDB Cloud console](https://tidbcloud.com/).
 > - In addition to the **SQL Users** page, you can also manage database users and roles by connecting to your cluster with a SQL client and writing SQL statements. For more information, see [TiDB User Account Management](https://docs.pingcap.com/tidb/dev/user-account-management).
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ In TiDB Cloud, you can grant both a built-in role and multiple custom roles (if
 
     In addition to a built-in role, if your cluster has custom roles that are created using the [`CREATE ROLE`](/sql-statements/sql-statement-create-role.md) statement, you can also grant these custom roles to a SQL user when you create or edit SQL users in the TiDB Cloud console.
 
-After a SQL user is granted both a built-in role and multiple custom roles, the user's permissions will be the union of all the permissions from these roles.
+After a SQL user is granted both a built-in role and multiple custom roles, the user's permissions will be the union of all the permissions derived from these roles.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
@@ -46,15 +46,16 @@ To create a SQL user, take the following steps:
     >
     > If you have multiple projects, you can click <MDSvgIcon name="icon-left-projects" /> in the lower-left corner and switch to another project.
 
-2. Click your cluster name, and then click **SQL users** in the left navigation pane.
+2. Click your cluster name, and then click **SQL Users** in the left navigation pane.
+
 3. Click **Create SQL User** in the upper-right corner.
 
     A dialog for the SQL user configuration is displayed.
 
 4. In the dialog, provide the information of the SQL user as follows:
 
     1. Enter the name of the SQL user.
-    2. Either enter a password for the SQL users or let TiDB Cloud automatically generate a password for the user.
+    2. Either create a password for the SQL user or let TiDB Cloud automatically generate a password for the user.
     3. Grant roles to the SQL user.
 
         - **Built-in Role**: you need to select a built-in role for the SQL user in the **Built-in Role** drop-down list.
@@ -75,7 +76,7 @@ To view SQL users of a cluster, take the following steps:
     >
     > If you have multiple projects, you can click <MDSvgIcon name="icon-left-projects" /> in the lower-left corner and switch to another project.
 
-2. Click your cluster name, and then click **SQL users** in the left navigation pane.
+2. Click your cluster name, and then click **SQL Users** in the left navigation pane.
 
 ## Edit a SQL user
 
@@ -87,12 +88,13 @@ To edit the password or roles of a SQL user, take the following steps:
     >
     > If you have multiple projects, you can click <MDSvgIcon name="icon-left-projects" /> in the lower-left corner and switch to another project.
 
-2. Click your cluster name, and then click **SQL users** in the left navigation pane.
+2. Click your cluster name, and then click **SQL Users** in the left navigation pane.
+
 3. In the row of the SQL user to be edited, click **...** in the **Action** column, and then click **Edit**.
 
     A dialog for the SQL user configuration is displayed.
 
-4. In the dialog, you can edit the user password and roles as needed.
+4. In the dialog, you can edit the user password and roles as needed, and then click **Update**.
 
     > **Note:**
     >
@@ -108,7 +110,8 @@ To delete a SQL user, take the following steps:
     >
     > If you have multiple projects, you can click <MDSvgIcon name="icon-left-projects" /> in the lower-left corner and switch to another project.
 
-2. Click your cluster name, and then click **SQL users** in the left navigation pane.
+2. Click your cluster name, and then click **SQL Users** in the left navigation pane.
+
 3. In the row of the SQL user to be edited, click **...** in the **Action** column, and then click **Delete**.
 
     > **Note:**