Toning done my voice. This is getting more attention than I had expec…

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-    <h3>Civlized Society</h3>
+    <h3>Society</h3>
 
-    <p>We should start treating loud ringing phones in public like smoking - an irritant and polluting agent for people around. Almost all phones have a way to indicate an incoming phone call -- be it the vibrate mode or the blinking light. It is possible not to have phones that ring every time there is an incoming call. The ideal solution should be a mandate to <strong>ban all loud phone sounds</strong> in public.</p>
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+      We should start treating loud ringing phones in public like smoking - an irritant and polluting agent for people around. Almost all phones have a way to indicate an incoming phone call -- be it the vibrate mode or the blinking light. It is possible not to have phones that ring every time there is an incoming call.
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     <h3>Phone Makers</h3>
 
-    <p>Phone makers can help transition to a better and civilized world by implementing silent phones by default.</p>
+    <p>
+      Phone makers can help transition to a better world by implementing silent phones by default.
+    </p>
 
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       <li>Phones are on silent mode by default and have to explicitely turn the mode off (reverse of the current trend).</li>