add task solution #2750
add task solution #2750
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Thank you for your hard work on this pull request! While your implementation is mostly correct and meets many of the task requirements, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve it:
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Critical Syntax Error: The
NewMoviecomponent is missing the closing tag for the opening<NewMovie>element. This is a syntax error that will prevent the component from rendering correctly. Please update it to<NewMovie onAdd={movie => handleAddMovie(movie)} />. -
Redundant Checks: There are redundant checks in your code that can be optimized:
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TextFieldcomponent, thehasErrorUrlcondition checks bothvalidate(value)anderror, but sinceerroris already set based onvalidate(value), you can simplify this by just checkingerror. - In the
NewMoviecomponent, theisFormValid()check is performed twice in thehandleSubmitfunction. The second check is unnecessary and can be removed to streamline the logic.
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Once these issues are resolved, your code will be in great shape! Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing the updated version. 😊
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src/App.tsx
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| <NewMovie | ||
| onAdd={movie => { | ||
| return handleAddMovie(movie); | ||
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The NewMovie component is missing the closing tag for the opening <NewMovie> element. It should be <NewMovie onAdd={movie => handleAddMovie(movie)} /> instead of splitting the tag across multiple lines. This is a syntax error and will cause the component not to render correctly.
src/components/NewMovie/NewMovie.tsx
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| if (isFormValid()) { | ||
| const newMovie = { | ||
| title: formData.title, | ||
| description: formData.description, | ||
| imgUrl: formData.imgUrl, | ||
| imdbUrl: formData.imdbUrl, | ||
| imdbId: formData.imdbId, | ||
| }; | ||
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| onAdd(newMovie); | ||
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| setFormData({ | ||
| title: '', | ||
| description: '', | ||
| imgUrl: '', | ||
| imdbUrl: '', | ||
| imdbId: '', | ||
| }); | ||
| setIsSubmitted(false); | ||
| setCount(prev => prev + 1); | ||
| } |
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The isFormValid() check is performed twice in the handleSubmit function. The second check is redundant since the first check already returns if the form is not valid. You can remove the second if (isFormValid()) block and directly proceed with the logic inside it after the first check.
| const hasError = touched && required && !value; | ||
| const hasErrorUrl = (touched || isSubmitted) && validate(value) && error; |
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The hasErrorUrl condition checks validate(value) and error, but error is already set based on validate(value). You can simplify this condition by just checking error instead of calling validate(value) again.
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| {hasErrorUrl && ( | ||
| <p className="help is-danger"> | ||
| {validate(value) || `${label} is not well`} |
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Since error is already set based on validate(value) in the handleChange function, you can use error directly here instead of calling validate(value) again.
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Great job on addressing the previous issues in your code! 🎉 Your implementation now meets the task requirements and constraints. Here are some key points from the review:
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NewMovie Component: You've corrected the syntax error and streamlined the logic by removing the redundant
isFormValid()check in thehandleSubmitfunction. The component now properly verifies that required fields are filled out and disables the submit button until all required fields are completed. Additionally, the form is cleared after adding a new movie, and errors are not shown post-clearance. -
TextField Component: The redundant checks have been optimized, and the
hasErrorUrlcondition now efficiently checkserrorbased onvalidate(value).
While the code aligns well with the task requirements, remember to review the comments to further improve your code. Addressing any critical issues in the future will help you avoid similar problems and enhance your learning experience. Keep up the great work and continue to learn from your mistakes! 🚀
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