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                 <b>Hardware</b> from A to Z
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-                At HackUMass we not only focus on creating a collaborative
-                environment for developers/engineers to create awesome software
-                projects, but also give all the tools that you will need to
-                create awesome hardware hacks! With Arduinos, Raspberry Pis,
-                circuit components, quadcopters, Oculus Rifts, and more, we have
-                the hardware, you have the ideas, so come bring them to life at
-                HackUMass.
+                At HackUMass, we foster collaboration among developers and engineers, 
+                empowering them to craft outstanding software and hardware projects. 
+                Our extensive toolkit includes everything from Arduinos and Raspberry 
+                Pis to quadcopters and Oculus Rifts. With the resources in hand and 
+                your creative ideas, let's bring them to life at HackUMass!
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                 Creative <b>Hackers</b>
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-                Our hackers come from all around the country and from many
-                diverse backgrounds. Veteran hackers, first-timers, developers,
-                engineers, entrepreneurs, and even non-tech majors -- this is
-                who we are. Our goal is to bring together and inspire hackers
-                from every background and provide opportunities to continue 
-                growing in diversity. Come with friends, make new friends, join 
-                800 other participants in one of the biggest and best hackathons 
-                in New England.
+                HackUMass welcomes hackers of all backgrounds and experience 
+                levels - from veterans to newcomers, developers to entrepreneurs. 
+                Our aim is to unite and inspire a diverse community. Join 800 
+                participants in one of New England's top hackathons. Come make 
+                new connections and be part of something special.
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               Incredible <b>Venue</b>
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-              Tired of hacking in some old gym? Say no more! HackUMass is hosted
-              in the Integrative Learning Center (ILC), one of the newest
-              state-of-the-art academic buildings at UMass Amherst. Within the
-              walls of the four-story 173,000 sq. ft. structure, the ILC
-              provides 2,000 seats and plenty of spaces for hacking, sleeping,
-              yoga, Super Smash Bros, and much more! As one of the largest
-              research universities in New England, we take our hacking spaces
-              seriously, and we hope you like it.
+              Tired of the same old gym-based hacking? Say no more! HackUMass takes 
+              place in the cutting-edge Integrative Learning Center (ILC) at 
+              UMass Amherst. This state-of-the-art, four-story, 173,000 sq. ft. 
+              facility offers 2,000 seats and ample space for hacking, rest, yoga, 
+              Super Smash Bros, and more. As one of New England's biggest research 
+              universities, we're serious about our hacking spaces, and we think 
+              you'll love it.
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               <a
                 href="http://www.food-management.com/news-trends/umass-tops-2016-princeton-review-best-campus-food-listing">#1
                 dining service in the nation!</a>
-              And as a participant of HackUMass you will get access to all of
-              our top-rated dining halls and other dining facilities. Have any
-              special dietary restrictions? Not to worry! We accommodate all
-              dietary restrictions.
+                As a HackUMass participant, you'll enjoy access to our highly-rated 
+                dining halls and other facilities. Any dietary restrictions? No problem! 
+                We cater to all special dietary needs.
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               Generous <b>Sponsors</b>
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-              HackUMass wouldn't happen without the support of our awesome
-              sponsors. From startups to big-name brands, we work with the
-              innovators and the makers. Workshops, tech talks, sweet prizes,
-              swag, mini-competitions, hardware/APIs -- we partner with the best
-              in the industry to make this event come to life. Check out some of
-              this year's sponsors below (and make sure to say thanks if you see
-              them!). Note: If you are a company interested in sponsoring our
-              event send us an e-mail at <a href="mailto:[email protected]"
-                target="_blank">[email protected]</a> and we can get
-              you connected with one of our sponsorship team members.
+              HackUMass thrives with the support of our diverse incredible sponsors, 
+              ranging from startups to industry giants. They bring you workshops, 
+              tech talks, prizes, swag, and more. Check out this year's sponsors below
+              (and make sure to say thanks to them)! If your company is interested in 
+              sponsoring, reach out to us at <a href="mailto:[email protected]"
+              target="_blank">[email protected]</a>. 
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