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 <!--Example: High-Throughput Screening-->
 
 ### Description
-Data produced on research animals using imaging techniques like MR, PET/MR, PET/CT.
+Data produced on animals using imaging techniques like MR, PET/MR, PET/CT.
 
 ### Type of data/experiments/methods
 #### MR Imaging
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 ### Data Deposition Repository
 
 #### Repository
-- Presently there are no available national or international platforms for storage and re-use access for the type of imaging data NORMOLIM will produce.
-- For long term data storage an option might be the National e-Infrastructure for Research Data [NIRD RESEARCH DATA ARCHIVE](https://archive.norstore.no/). Owned and operated by [Sigma2](https://www.sigma2.no/research-data-archive)
+- Presently, there are no available national or international platforms dedicated to storing and making available for re-use the type of imaging data produced by NORMOLIM.
+- For long term data storage, an option might be the National e-Infrastructure for Research Data [NIRD RESEARCH DATA ARCHIVE](https://archive.norstore.no/). This service is owned and operated by [Sigma2](https://www.sigma2.no/research-data-archive)
 
 ### Ethics and Regulations
 <!--Add information about laws and policies in Norway for relevant data types-->
-All work with laboratory animals that is performed at NORMOLIM is subject to
+All the work with laboratory animals performed at NORMOLIM is subject to
 - Norwegian law, the Animal welfare act (LOV-2009-06-19-97),
 - the Norwegian Regulation on Animal Experimentation (FOR-2015-06-18-761)
 - the European Convention for the Protection of Vertebrate Animals Used for Experimental and Other Scientific Purposes  (ETS 123)
-- be approved by the Norwegian authority on animal welfare (Forsøksdyrutvalget)
+Moreover, it has be approved by the Norwegian authority on animal welfare (Forsøksdyrutvalget)
 
 Work involving genetically modified microorganisms (including bacteria, virus and viral vectors) and animals must be conducted in accordance with the Norwegian Regulation on Enclosed Use of Genetically Modified Microorganisms (FOR-2001-12-21-1600) and Regulation on Genetically Modified Animals (FOR-2001-12-21-1602), and must be reported to the Norwegian Directorate of Health.