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 DESI's early data release (EDR) will soon be made publicly available at an S3 cloud storage "bucket" on Amazon Web Services (AWS). 
 If you have sufficient storage space, you can download and host the entire data release locally. 
-However, due to the large memory footprint, we recommend most users to stream the data they need from the cloud.
+However, due to the large memory footprint, we recommend most users to stream the data on-demand from the cloud.
 
-Here, we provide a Docker image which makes it seamless to work with cloud- and locally-hosted DESI data.
+Here, we provide a Docker image which makes it seamless to work with both local and cloud-hosted DESI data.
 This Docker image is a self-contained code environment which comes pre-packaged with
 * A Jupyter server installed with general Python libraries for scientific programming, as well as DESI-specific libraries, and
 * (If you are not hosting locally), a filesystem mounted to the DESI S3 bucket, which automatically downloads the data you query and nothing more.