Merge pull request #499 from marionwalton/fix-typos

Update 02-starting-with-data.Rmd
datacarpentry · Dec 13, 2023 · f14df50 · f14df50
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@@ -539,10 +539,10 @@ plot(memb_assoc)
 ```
 
 Looking at the plot compared to the output of the vector, we can see that in
-addition to "no"s and "yes"s, there are some respondents for which the
+addition to "no"s and "yes"s, there are some respondents for whom the
 information about whether they were part of an irrigation association hasn't
-been recorded, and encoded as missing data. They do not appear on the plot.
-Let's encode them differently so they can counted and visualized in our plot.
+been recorded, and encoded as missing data. These respondents do not appear on the plot.
+Let's encode them differently so they can be counted and visualized in our plot.
 
 ```{r factor-plot-reorder, fig.alt="Bar plot of association membership, showing missing responses.", purl=TRUE}
 ## Let's recreate the vector from the data frame column "memb_assoc"