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miri64 authored and Christian Amsüss committed Oct 21, 2024
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6 changes: 3 additions & 3 deletions draft-ietf-core-transport-indication.md
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Expand Up @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ The transport indicated by a URI is not only influenced by the URI scheme,
but also by the authority component.
The transports and resolution mechanisms currently specified
make little use of this possibility,
mainly because the most prominent resolution mechanism (SVCB records) has not been avaialble when {{?RFC8323}} was published
mainly because the most prominent resolution mechanism (SVCB records) has not been available when {{?RFC8323}} was published
and because it can not be expressed in IP literals.
The provisions of this document
enable this opportunistically for registered names
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The resolution mechanism or other underlying transport can give guidance on how to find the best usable one.
With the currently specified transports and resolution mechanisms,
the most prominent example of making use of that information
is applying {{?RFC8305}}'s Happy Eyeballs mechanism to establish a TCP connection
is applying the Happy Eyeballs mechanism {{?RFC8305}} to establish a TCP connection
when a name resolves to both IPv4 and IPv6 addresses,

\[ TBD: Do we want to extend this to HTTP proxies? Probably just not, and if so, only to those that can just take coap://... for a URI. \]
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If a service's discovery process does not produce a URI but an address, host name and/or Service Binding Parameters,
those can be converted to a CoAP URI,
for which transport hints are already encoded in the parameters the URI is constructed from.
An example of this is DNS server discovery {{?I-D.lenders-core-dnr}}.
An example of this is DNS server discovery {{?I-D.ietf-core-coap-dtls-svcb}}.

While it is up to the service to define the service's semantics,
this section applies to any service
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(An alternative would be using a dedicated naming scheme, say, `transport:coap:device.example.com:port`,
but that would needlessly introduce implementation complexity).

Note that this mechanism can only used with proxies that use CoAP's native address indication mechanisms.
Note that this mechanism can only be used with proxies that use the native address indication mechanisms of CoAP.
Proxies that perform URI mapping
(as described in Section 5 of {{?RFC8075}}, especially using URI templates)
are not supported in this document.

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