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Expand Up @@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ similar CBOR data item. This path format was chosen to coincide with the path re
({{-cri}}). Furthermore, it is easily transferable into a sequence of CoAP Uri-Path options by
mapping the initial byte of any present CBOR text string (see {{-cbor, Section 3}}) into the Option
Delta and Option Length of the CoAP option, provided these CBOR text strings are all of a length
between 0 and 12 octets (see {{-coap, Section 3.1}}). Likewise, it can be transfered into a URI
between 0 and 12 octets (see {{-coap, Section 3.1}}). Likewise, it can be transferred into a URI
path-abempty form (see {{-uri, Section 3.3}}) by replacing the initial byte of any present CBOR text
string with the "/" character, provided these CBOR text strings are all of a length lesser than 24
octets and do not contain bytes that need escaping.
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if it is "co", construct a CoAP request for CoAP over DTLS. Any other SvcParamKeys specifying a
CoAP transport are out of scope of this document.
- The destination address for the request should be taken from additional information about the
target, e.g. from an AAAA record associated to the target name or from an "ipv6hint" SvcParam
target, e.g., from an AAAA record associated to the target name or from an "ipv6hint" SvcParam
value, or, as a fallback, by querying an address for the target name of the SVCB record.
- The destination port for the address is taken from the "port" SvcParam value, if present.
Otherwise, take the default port of the CoAP transport.
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Level of maturity:
: production

Version compability:
: draft-ietf-core-dns-over-coap-08
Version compatibility:
: draft-ietf-core-dns-over-coap-09

License:
: LGPL-2.1
Expand All @@ -481,8 +481,8 @@ Python][aiodnsprox].
Level of maturity:
: production

Version compability:
: draft-ietf-core-dns-over-coap-08
Version compatibility:
: draft-ietf-core-dns-over-coap-09

License:
: MIT
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| Number | Name | Meaning | Reference |
| ------- | -------------- | ---------------------------------- | --------------- |
| 10 (suggested) | docpath | DNS over CoAP resource path | \[TBD-this-spec, {{sec:doc-server-selection}}\] |
{: #tab-svc-param-keys title="Values for SvcParamKeys"}

New "core.dns" Resource Type
----------------------------
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Since [draft-ietf-core-dns-over-coap-04]
----------------------------------------
- Add note on cachable OSCORE
- Add note on cacheable OSCORE
- Address early IANA review

Since [draft-ietf-core-dns-over-coap-03]
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