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 ## NAVIGATING THE SITE
-Read more about how the Harvard Tissue Atlas will move spatial biology forward by exploring our site. The best way to learn about the methods being used to build these atlases is via our webinar-based curriculum at the [LEARN](/curriculum) tab, by exploring our [ATLASES](https://www.tissue-atlas.org/atlases), by browsing our [PUBLICATIONS](/publications), or by reading about our [DATA STANDARDS](/data-standards). You can view the full collection of data on the [DATA EXPLORATIONS](/data-explorations) page. Visit the [JOIN US](/join-us) page to learn more about available positions within the HTA, and collaboration opportunities.
+Explore our site to discover how the Harvard Tissue Atlas is advancing spatial biology. Learn about the cutting-edge methods behind our atlases through our webinar-based curriculum at the [LEARN](/curriculum) tab. Explore our [ATLASES](https://www.tissue-atlas.org/atlases), read our [PUBLICATIONS](/publications), and learn about our [DATA STANDARDS](/data-standards). For a comprehensive look at our data, head to [DATA EXPLORATIONS](/data-explorations). Check out the [JOIN US](/join-us) page for available positions and collaboration opportunities.