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diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/references/exoscale/architecture.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/pages/references/exoscale/architecture.adoc
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ See https://kb.vshn.ch/oc4/explanations/exoscale/limitations.html#_private_netwo
 
 The individual VMs are placed in https://community.exoscale.com/documentation/compute/security-groups[Security Groups] to restrict access and isolate the nodes from the public internet.
 
-NOTE: On the {infra-type} environment there is no single stable egress IP. Every node uses a dynamic public IP for egress traffic, which it is not suited for any forms of whitelisting.
+NOTE: On the {infra-type} environment there is no single stable egress IP. Every node uses a dynamic public IP for egress traffic, which it's not suited for any forms of whitelisting.
 
 === Virtual IPs
 

diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/partials/architecture/storage.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/partials/architecture/storage.adoc
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ The {infra-type} CSI driver is the in-cluster component which is responsible for
 endif::[]
 
 ifeval::["{infra-type}" == "Exoscale"]
-NOTE: On the {infra-type} environment there is no Kubernetes integration available for such block devices.
-https://products.vshn.ch/appuio/managed/storage_cluster.html[APPUiO Managed Storage Cluster] is available as and addon to the cluster offering if such functionality is required.
+IMPORTANT: {infra-type} does not provide storage usable by Kubernetes as persistent volumes.
+To fill this gap, {product} in {intra-type} uses https://products.vshn.ch/appuio/managed/storage_cluster.html[APPUiO Managed Storage Cluster] to provide storage to be used as read write once and read write many persistent volumes.
 endif::[]
 
 These devices hold application data, but backups are usually done from within the cluster.

diff --git a/docs/modules/ROOT/partials/nav.adoc b/docs/modules/ROOT/partials/nav.adoc
@@ -14,8 +14,7 @@
 ** xref:oc4:ROOT:references/architecture/metering-data-flow-appuio-managed.adoc[Resource Usage Reporting]
 ** xref:oc4:ROOT:references/architecture/single_sign_on.adoc[]
 
-** Exoscale
-*** xref:oc4:ROOT:references/exoscale/architecture.adoc[Architecture]
+** xref:oc4:ROOT:references/exoscale/architecture.adoc[Exoscale]
 *** xref:oc4:ROOT:explanations/exoscale/limitations.adoc[Limitations]
 
 ** Google Cloud Platform