Update arc-0041.md

Wording + naming
algorandfoundation · Jul 11, 2023 · 106dc71 · 106dc71
1 parent bbc1039
commit 106dc71
Showing 1 changed file with 12 additions and 12 deletions.
diff --git a/ARCs/arc-0041.md b/ARCs/arc-0041.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 arc: 41
 title: NFT's vault of NFTs & FTs
-description: Application ID storing NFTs & FTs on behalf of user
+description: Application subsidiaries of an NFT storing NFTs & FTs
 author: Stéphane BARROSO (@SudoWeezy)
 discussions-to: https://github.com/algorandfoundation/ARCs/issues/213
 status: Draft
@@ -12,19 +12,19 @@ created: 2023-06-16
 
 ## Abstract
 This standard is inspired by <a href="https://eips.ethereum.org/EIPS/eip-6551">EIP-6551</a>
-The goal is to create a smart contract who will give is owner a way to bundle multiple Algo/Fungible Token/NFTs at once.
+The goal is to create a smart contract that will give its owner a way to bundle multiple Algo/Fungible Token/NFTs at once.
 
 
 ## Specification
 The key words "**MUST**", "**MUST NOT**", "**REQUIRED**", "**SHALL**", "**SHALL NOT**", "**SHOULD**", "**SHOULD NOT**", "**RECOMMENDED**", "**MAY**", and "**OPTIONAL**" in this document are to be interpreted as described in <a href="https://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt">RFC-2119</a>.
 
 ### Glossary
-In the document we will use following syntax:
+In the document, we will use the following syntax:
 - Authority NFT -> NFT that detain & manage others NFTs & FTs 
 - Vault -> Application ID holding NFTs & FTs of the Authority NFT
 
 ### Events
-In order to allow wallet & dApps to identify the vault of the Authority NFT, an [ARC-28](./arc-0028.md) event MUST be emitted when creating the vault.
+To allow wallet & dApps to identify the vault of the Authority NFT, an [ARC-28](./arc-0028.md) event MUST be emitted when creating the vault.
 ```json
 {
   "events": [
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ In order to allow wallet & dApps to identify the vault of the Authority NFT, an
         },
         {
           "type": "uint64",
-          "name": "AppId",
+          "name": "appId",
           "desc": "The Application ID of the authority NFT, (0 if ASA)"
         }
       ]
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ In order to allow wallet & dApps to identify the vault of the Authority NFT, an
 }
 ```
 
-A `arc41_AccountCreated` event MUST be emitted, when a vault is created.
+An `arc41_AccountCreated` event MUST be emitted when a vault is created.
 
 
 ### Interface
@@ -69,16 +69,16 @@ A `arc41_AccountCreated` event MUST be emitted, when a vault is created.
   "methods": [
     {
       "name": "arc41_isOwner",
-      "desc": "Indicate if the caller detain the Authority NFT of this vault, this method MUST be called internally by every other methods of the application, it must call ARC-72 ownerOf in case of a application NFT",
+      "desc": "Indicate if the caller detains the Authority NFT of this vault, this method MUST be called internally by every other method of the application, it must call ARC-72 ownerOf in case of an application NFT",
       "readonly": true,
-      "returns": { "type": "bool", "desc": "True if the caller detain the Authority NFT of this vault, False otherwise" }
+      "returns": { "type": "bool", "desc": "True if the caller detains the Authority NFT of this vault, False otherwise" }
     },
     {
       "name": "arc41_optIn",
       "desc": "Opt-in ASA in the vault",
       "readonly": false,
       "args": [
-        { "type": "uint64", "name": "assetId" }
+        { "type": "uint64", "name": "asaId" }
       ],
       "returns": { "type": "void" }
     },
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ A `arc41_AccountCreated` event MUST be emitted, when a vault is created.
         },
         {
           "type": "uint64",
-          "name": "AppId",
+          "name": "appId",
           "desc": "The Application ID of the authority NFT, (0 if ASA)"
         }
       ],
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ A `arc41_AccountCreated` event MUST be emitted, when a vault is created.
 }
 ```
 
-The `arc41_isOwner` method MUST be called internaly by every other methods.
+The `arc41_isOwner` method MUST be called internally by every other method.
 The `arc41_transferAlgoFrom` method MUST error when `from` is not the owner of `asaId` or `tokenId`.
 The `arc41_transferFrom` method MUST error when `from` is not the owner of `asaId` or `tokenId`.
 
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ ASAs NFT following [ARC-3](./arc-0003.md), [ARC-19](./arc-0019.md) or [ARC-69](.
 This standard is compatible with every NFT standard.
 
 ## Security Considerations
-The method `isOwner` **MUST** be called internally by the logic of every other method of the application to ensure that the caller detain the Authority NFT.
+The method `isOwner` **MUST** be called internally by the logic of every other application method to ensure that the caller detains the Authority NFT.
 
 ## Copyright
 Copyright and related rights waived via <a href="https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/">CCO</a>.