Update comments on pirate yarn

YarnSpinnerTool · Apr 1, 2024 · 52e8426 · 52e8426
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 // Welcome to Yarn Spinner for Books!
 //
-// Yarn Spinner for Books is a tool for creating choosable-path 
-// adventure books from Yarn script!
+// Yarn Spinner for Books is a tool for creating choosable-path adventure books from Yarn script!
 //
-// Try clicking 'Download Book' at the top right now to see what
-// it looks like!
+// Try clicking 'Download Book' at the top right now to see what it looks like!
 //
-// If you aren't already familiar with writing in Yarn, head to
-// https://try.yarnspinner.dev, and we'll teach you. Then, come back
-// here and write a book!
+// If you aren't already familiar with writing in Yarn, head to https://try.yarnspinner.dev, and we'll teach you. Then, come back here and write a book!
 // 
-// Just a quick note: Yarn Spinner for Books might contain bugs
-// and problems, and it comes with no guarantees that it works!
+// Just a quick note: Yarn Spinner for Books might contain bugs and problems, and it comes with no guarantees that it works!
 // If you need help, here are some resources:
-// Yarn Spinner documentation: https://docs.yarnspinner.dev 
+///Yarn Spinner documentation: https://docs.yarnspinner.dev 
 // Yarn Spinner's community: https://discord.gg/yarnspinner
 
 You wake up to the sound of seagulls cawing and the salty smell of the sea breeze wafting through your window. Today feels different (and its not just the hangover), as if the wind itself is whispering tales of distant lands and treasures untold. You've spent your life in the small coastal town of Marrow's End, listening to old sailors' tales of the high seas. But today, the call of adventure is too strong to ignore. With nothing but a satchel of essentials (mostly flour, for some reason), and a heart full of dreams (mostly treasure), you set out towards Port Bellylaugh, where ships big and small anchor, waiting for those brave enough to seek their fortune. Will today be the day you leave your old life behind and start anew on the path of adventure?