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 It should be noted that several articles that discussed long-term projects, that
 could be said to have reached a sustainable period. The Visualization Toolkit
-(VTK) was described~\cite{Hanwell_WSSSPE}, being one of the oldest projects
+(VTK) was described~\cite{Hanwell_WSSSPE} as being one of the oldest projects
 serving as a basis for several other tools such as ParaView~\cite{Hanwell_WSSSPE}, VisIt~\cite{Ahern_WSSSPE}, and VisTrails~\cite{Koop_WSSSPE}. Other examples of
-long-term, sustainable projects included MVAPICH~\cite{Panda_WSSSPE} which began
-development in 2000, R/qtl~\cite{Broman_WSSSPE} which also began development
-in 2000, and DUNE~\cite{Blatt_WSSSPE} which is also over a decade old. In
-addition to how long a project has been active other metrics are important,
+long-term, sustainable projects included MVAPICH~\cite{Panda_WSSSPE} and R/qtl~\cite{Broman_WSSSPE}, which both began development
+in 2000, and DUNE~\cite{Blatt_WSSSPE}, which is also over a decade old. In
+addition to how long a project has been active, other metrics are important,
 such as number of developers, number of institutions, and whether there are
 active developers acting as advocates for the continued viability of a project
 beyond individual projects and/or institutions.