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content/blog/v1-35-released.md

@@ -9,19 +9,19 @@ It's time for another update, filled with exciting tools for project creation an
 
 ### An all-new costume editing feature
 
-Our first new addon is a costume editor feature - it's called "Skewing in costume editor".
+This addon adds a brand new costume editor feature - it's called "Skewing in costume editor".
 
-By skewing, we mean this:
+Skewing lets you move one axis so that the object has a slant, as shown below:
 
 ![Skewing demonstration](/assets/img/blog/v1-35-released/skew-demo.gif)
 
 You can use this to create slanted objects and italic text! To skew an object, enable the addon, then, while dragging a horizontal or vertical resize handle, hold <kbd>Ctrl</kbd> and drag parallel to the side. Hold <kbd>Ctrl</kbd> and <kbd>Alt</kbd> simultaneously to skew it out in both directions.
 
-And yes, you can skew a selection of multiple objects as well.
+And yes, you can skew a selection of multiple objects.
 
-### This feature was hidden for some random reason
+### A hidden feature 🤫
 
-Did you know that `point towards` blocks accept "random direction" as an option? That's right, we turned this into an addon so you can do that. It just saves a `pick random` block.
+Did you know that `point towards` blocks accept "random direction" as an option? That's right, we made this addon to unlock this before unavailable feature. It just saves a `pick random` block.
 
 !["point towards mouse-pointer" block with dropdown open and an option for random direction highlighted](/assets/img/blog/v1-35-released/random-dir.png)
 
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Not only is color contrast important for readability, but also size. That's why
 
 ![Block palette with larger text on blocks](/assets/img/blog/v1-35-released/large-text.png)
 
-The nice thing about this is it also affects the block palette.
+This also affects the block palette!
 
 ### Set your own increments
 
@@ -55,12 +55,11 @@ And now that this feature has become its own addon, you don't even have to enabl
 
 ### What the sprite?
 
-You know of that bug where you're trying to drag and drop something into a sprite and it just makes the sprite pane glitch out? We've already had a fix for that - the "Disable sprite wobble in sprite pane" addon (this bug is actually why we made that addon), except now, we found a way to fix the bug without disabling the wobble animation as a consequence. Our upgraded addon is called "Fix sprite pane glitching".
+Have you ever tried to drag and drop something into a sprite and it just makes the sprite pane glitch out? We found a way to fix the bug without disabling the wobble animation as a consequence. Our new bugfix addon is called "Fix sprite pane glitching".
 
-So if that bug has been annoying you, now is the perfect time to start using this addon!
 
 ### Longer recordings
 
-Content creators rejoice as the "Project video recorder" addon's maximum duration has been increased from 5 minutes up to 10! You can do a lot in that time!
+Content creators rejoice as the "Project video recorder" addon's maximum duration has been increased from 5 minutes up to 10. That's a lot of time for your game, animation, or other recordings!
 
 As always, we've also made quite a few other small improvements and fixed various bugs like messages loading slower than usual in Scratch Messaging. Enjoy the update!