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           <h3>Advanced Deck-building: Fast Brewing</h3>
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-            Building your first Commander deck can be both exciting and
-            overwhelming. With thousands of cards to choose from and countless
-            strategies to explore, it's easy to feel lost. This guide is
-            designed to help new players step into the world of Commander. We'll
-            start by commanders that are perfect for beginners. Then, we'll walk
-            you through a simple framework for building your first deck.
-            Finally, we'll give you a few extra tools to help you refine your
-            deck as you play and make it your own!
+            Have you ever had a moment where you find a commander and you think
+            it’s cool but you’re not sure if there will be enough cards
+            available to make the deck run smoothly, or you weren’t sure if it
+            will feel good to play so you’ve not wanted to waste time brewing up
+            a 100-card deck? Well, in this guide, I’m going to show you how you
+            can dramatically reduce the time it takes to test out a deck idea or
+            even just a commander.
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