Update content/en/monitors/guide/notification-message-best-practices.md

Co-authored-by: Esther Kim <[email protected]>

content/en/monitors/guide/notification-message-best-practices.md

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Craft the Monitor Name to include key information for the responder to quickly u
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 | *Memory usage* | *High memory usage on {{pod\_name.name}}* |
 
-Although both the examples above are referring to a memory consumption monitor, the first one gives a complete representation of the ongoing issue with some necessary context to narrow down the investigation.
+While both the examples refer to a memory consumption monitor, the improved title gives a thorough representation with essential context for focused investigation.
 
 ### Message