Text fixes

Various text corrections.
07th-mod · Oct 16, 2020 · 5c86c82 · 5c86c82
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commit 5c86c82
Showing 1 changed file with 6 additions and 6 deletions.
diff --git a/Update/tsum_badend1.txt b/Update/tsum_badend1.txt
@@ -1823,7 +1823,7 @@ void main()
 //r多分、学校の２階、……営林署の事務室からだ。
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	OutputLine(NULL, "多分、学校の２階、……営林署の事務室からだ。",
-			NULL, "It was most likely from the first floor of the school building, .......from the office room of the Forestry Service.", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "It was most likely from the second floor of the school building, .......from the office room of the Forestry Service.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 	DrawSceneWithMask( "background/greyscale/gr2", "maskc", 1, 0, 300 );
@@ -1839,7 +1839,7 @@ void main()
 //rレナはそれを知っていて、ずっと２階に隠れていたのだ。
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	OutputLine(NULL, "レナはそれを知っていて、ずっと２階に隠れていたのだ。",
-			NULL, "Rena had known this, and had been hiding on the first floor all this time.", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "Rena had known this, and had been hiding on the second floor all this time.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //rそして、２階から１階に電話して、……知恵先生を遠方に遠ざけたのだ。
@@ -2065,7 +2065,7 @@ void main()
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("<color=#956f6e>圭一</color>", NULL, "<color=#956f6e>Keiichi</color>", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	ModPlayVoiceLS(4, 1, "ps3/s09/01/430200035", 256, TRUE);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「…わかりました」",
-			NULL, "\"...I understand\"", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "\"...I understand.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //rそして大石は受話器を圭一に渡し、外の様子に目を向けて何かに気付いたのか、車を出て行った。
@@ -2607,7 +2607,7 @@ void main()
 //r突然、身体が吹き飛ばされて地面に叩きつけられ、…一瞬、何が起こったのかわからなかった。
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	OutputLine(NULL, "突然、身体が吹き飛ばされて地面に叩きつけられ、…一瞬、何が起こったのかわからなかった。",
-			NULL, "Our bodies were promptly blown away and hit the floor, we didn't understand what had happened for a moment.", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "Our bodies were promptly blown away and hit the ground, we didn't understand what had happened for a moment.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //圭一rvS09/01/430200044.「……。kvS09/01/430200045.…っ…？」
@@ -2636,7 +2636,7 @@ void main()
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("<color=#956f6e>圭一</color>", NULL, "<color=#956f6e>Keiichi</color>", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	ModPlayVoiceLS(4, 1, "ps3/s09/01/430200046", 256, TRUE);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「……っ」",
-			NULL, "\".....gh\"", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "\".....gh.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //r口の中のじゃりじゃりとしたものを唾とともに吐き出しながら、俺は痛む身体を起こして立ち上がり、…顔を前に、向けた。
@@ -2682,7 +2682,7 @@ void main()
 //r顔も、服も、全身を泥と埃にまみれさせて、…頭からは血を流している。
 	if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
 	OutputLine(NULL, "顔も、服も、全身を泥と埃にまみれさせて、…頭からは血を流している。",
-			NULL, "His entire body was covered in dirt and debris, and he was bleeding from his head", Line_Normal);
+			NULL, "His entire body was covered in dirt and debris, and he was bleeding from his head.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //rそれを気遣おうと膝を折りかけて、…俺は、レナや魅音たちの安否を思い出す。