From 09d31e48bdfba2047465f22240d38dfb5e19e9bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nicola Rustignoli Date: Fri, 18 Oct 2024 17:06:30 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] wording --- draft-dekater-scion-controlplane.md | 9 +++------ 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-dekater-scion-controlplane.md b/draft-dekater-scion-controlplane.md index 64a7aa2..b4de046 100644 --- a/draft-dekater-scion-controlplane.md +++ b/draft-dekater-scion-controlplane.md @@ -1280,14 +1280,11 @@ The propagation procedure includes the following elements: In order to maintain service availability, an AS SHOULD monitor the following aspects when deploying the SCION control plane: -- For routers (to enable correlation with link states): - - Fraction of configured core links that are up. - - Fraction of configured child links that are up. - - Fraction of configured parent links that are up (may be just 0/non-0). +- For routers (to enable correlation with link states): state of configured links (core, child, parent) - For any control service: - Fraction of path lookups served successfully (see [](#lookup)) - - Time synchronization offset with other ASes in relation to credible RTT (see [](#clock-inaccuracy)) + - Time synchronization offset with other ASes (see [](#clock-inaccuracy)) - Fraction of ASes found in non-expired segments for which a non-expired certificate exists - For a core AS: @@ -1297,7 +1294,7 @@ In order to maintain service availability, an AS SHOULD monitor the following as - For a non-core AS: - Number of up segments available (may be just 0/non-0) younger than the propagation interval (or some multiple thereof). - - Fraction of up segments that were successfully registred as down segments (see [](#path-segment-reg)). + - Fraction of up segments that were successfully registered as down segments (see [](#path-segment-reg)). - Fraction of children ASes (preferably only those to which the link is up) whereto a beacon was propagated during the last propagation interval ## Effects of Clock Inaccuracy {#clock-inaccuracy}