Update from simulacrum comments.

Author: ehuss

text/3501-edition-2024.md

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ By establishing a three-year cadence, this removes the ambiguity of what the exp
 
 The Rust Project intends to create a 2024 Edition.
 Currently, no specific changes are being announced in this RFC for this edition.
-Team members will be responsible for identifying changes they want to make and coordinate with the Edition project group.
+Teams will be responsible for identifying changes they want to make and coordinate with the Edition project group.
 
 ## Edition project group
 
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ The Edition project group is responsible for:
 * Monitoring adoption of the edition after the stabilization, and identifying issues that may need to be addressed after the release.
 * Continue to evaluate if the three year cadence makes sense, and potentially make recommendations to the Leadership Council for changes to the edition process.
 
-The Edition project group and the Leadership Council may approve minor changes to the process outlined above without public comment.
+The Edition project group may approve minor changes to the process outlined above without public comment.
 
 Major changes to the edition process, such as discarding the three-year model, must be made via the RFC process.