From cffe05e99213f37d3f4accc8fb53ce306d17f4a7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jared Bain <jared.bain@gsa.gov>
Date: Thu, 5 Sep 2024 15:25:18 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] updates after PIF review

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@@ -224,15 +224,6 @@ <h2><span>Expertise</span></h2>
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             <p class="font-body-md">More information on Qualifications can be found on the USAJOBS job announcement. </p>
             <p class="font-body-md">Please note, we will be utilizing a hurdle style qualification process that will also potentially include a written assessment and an interview for candidates who move through the process. More information can be found in the timeline below, and details and deadlines will be provided in a timely manner for candidates who progress to next hurdles.</p>
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-            <p class="font-body-md">Presidential Innovation Fellows have expertise in one of the following areas:</p>
-            <ul>
-              <li><strong>Data Strategy and AI:</strong> Data management, machine learning, data science, or modern statistical and computational methods.</li>
-              <li><strong>Product:</strong> Product development, product management, and/or agile software methodologies.</li>
-              <li><strong>Design and Experience:</strong> User experience (UX), human-centered design, service design, implementation design or customer experience (CX).</li>
-              <li><strong>Digital Transformation and Strategy:</strong> Digital marketing or advertising, healthcare innovation, change management, community outreach and engagement, DEIA (diversity, equity, inclusion, and accessibility), venture capital, accelerators, or incubators; or corporate innovation.</li>
-              <li><strong>Cloud Infrastructure and Technology Leadership:</strong> Cloud computing, cloud infrastructure, or enterprise-level technology leadership.</li>
-            </ul>
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@@ -244,7 +235,7 @@ <h2><span>Benefits</span></h2>
             <p class="font-body-md">As of January 2024, the GS-15 Step 1 salary for the Washington, D.C. locality is $163,964. </p>
             <p class="font-body-md">All fellows receive <a href="https://handbook.tts.gsa.gov/getting-started/classes/benefits/" target="_blank">federal employee benefits</a>. This includes medical, vision, and dental insurance, FSA accounts, life insurance, paid leave, and the Thrift Savings Plan (the government version of a 401K) with up to five percent matching. </p>
             <p class="font-body-md">PIFs also receive a $5,000 individual professional development budget administered by TTS.</p>
-            <p class="font-body-md">For more on leave policy, (including paid parental leave, applicable after 12 months) visit <a href="https://handbook.tts.gsa.gov/travel-and-leave/leave/#paid-parental-leave" target="_blank">the TTS Handbook</a>. </p>
+            <p class="font-body-md">For more on leave policy, (including paid parental leave, applicable after 12 months) visit <a href="https://handbook.tts.gsa.gov/travel-and-leave/leave/#types-of-leave" target="_blank">the TTS Handbook</a>. </p>
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@@ -252,11 +243,12 @@ <h2><span>Benefits</span></h2>
             <h2><span>Get Ready to Apply</span></h2>
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-            <p class="font-body-md">As part of your application, you’ll need to submit a federal-style resume. If you don’t already have one, it can take some time to put together. Here are <a href="https://join.tts.gsa.gov/resume/" target="_blank">tips on writing a federal resume</a> and an <a href="https://handbook.tts.gsa.gov/hiring-staying-or-changing-jobs/resume/" target="_blank">example of what a federal resume might look like</a>.</p>
+            <p class="font-body-md">As part of your application, you’ll need to submit a federal-style resume. If you don’t already have one, it can take some time to put together. You'll want to make sure that your resume clearly reflects your experience related to the qualifications listed in the job announcement. We strongly suggest reviewing these <a href="https://join.tts.gsa.gov/resume/" target="_blank">tips on writing a federal resume</a> and an <a href="https://handbook.tts.gsa.gov/hiring-staying-or-changing-jobs/resume/" target="_blank">example of what a federal resume might look like</a>.</p>
             <p class="font-body-md">
               Links to professional portfolios or profiles may be included and are optional. We recommend that you include them directly in your resume to ensure they are reviewed.
               In addition to the resume resources, we strongly encourage people to register for an upcoming <a href="{{site.baseurl}}/apply/#:~:text=Register%20for%20an%20Information%20Session%3A">virtual info session</a>. 
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+            <p class="front-body-md">Once your resume is ready for submission, apply to the job announcement on <a href="" target="_blank">USAJOBS</a>. All applications must be received by 11:59 pm ET on September 30, 2024.</p>
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-              <p>Be sure to apply before the application deadline! Late applications will not be accepted. All applications submitted before application deadline will be considered equally.</p>
+              <p>Be sure to apply before the application deadline! Late applications will not be accepted. All applications submitted before the application deadline will be considered equally.</p>
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