From 037e5e67cc5fae76142794b80c4c544219bc41f6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: John Practicalli <250870+practicalli-john@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 7 Nov 2023 11:15:44 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] quickstart: google closure overview update

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 docs/quickstart/google-clojure.md | 7 ++++---
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 # Google Closure
 
-In order to abstract away JavaScript environment differences ClojureScript relies on the [Google Closure Library](https://developers.google.com/closure/library/) (GCL). GCL supplies an important facility missing from JavaScript: namespaces and a way to declare dependencies between them. In fact ClojureScript namespaces get compiled to Google Closure namespaces.
+ClojueScript uses [Google Closure Library](https://developers.google.com/closure/library/) (GCL) to abstract away JavaScript environment differences. GCL provides support for namespaces and a means to declare dependencies between them. ClojureScript namespaces are compiled to Google Closure namespaces.
 
-Loading dependencies correctly across various browser targets is a surprisingly tricky affair. GCL accomplishes this by maintaining a
-dependency graph. When you require a namespace it will write the needed script tags in dependency order for you.
+Loading dependencies correctly across various browser targets is a surprisingly tricky affair.l 
+
+GCL maintains a dependency graph of the project to manage the loading of dependencies correctly, especially across various browser targets. Require a namespace in ClojureScript and GCL writes the script tags in dependency order.
 
 So what went wrong? If you look at `out/main.js` you will see some dependency graph building calls: