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releases/release-8.3.0.md

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 * Partitioned tables support global indexes (experimental) [#45133](https://github.com/pingcap/tidb/issues/45133) @[mjonss](https://github.com/mjonss) **tw@hfxsd** <!--1531-->
 
-    In previous versions of partitioned tables, there are some limitations because global indexes are not supported. For example, the unique key must contain a partition key. If the query condition does not have a partition key, the query will scan all partitions, resulting in poor performance. Starting from v7.6.0, the system variable [`tidb_enable_global_index`](/system-variables.md#tidb_enable_global_index-new-in-v760) is introduced to enable the global index feature. But this feature was under development at that time and it is not recommended to enable it.
+    In previous versions of partitioned tables, there are some limitations because global indexes are not supported. For example, the unique key must use every column in the table's partitioning expression. If the query condition does not use every column, the query will scan all partitions, resulting in poor performance. Starting from v7.6.0, the system variable [`tidb_enable_global_index`](/system-variables.md#tidb_enable_global_index-new-in-v760) is introduced to enable the global index feature. But this feature was under development at that time and it is not recommended to enable it.
 
-    Starting with v8.3.0, the global index feature is released as an experimental feature. You can explicitly create a global index for a partitioned table with the keyword `Global` to remove the restriction that the unique key must contain all partition keys, to meet flexible business needs. Global indexes also improve the query performance of unique indexes without partition keys.
+    Starting with v8.3.0, the global index feature is released as an experimental feature. You can explicitly create a global index for a partitioned table with the keyword `Global` to remove the restriction that the unique key must use every column in the table's partitioning expression, to meet flexible business needs. Global indexes also improve the query performance of unique indexes without partition keys.
 
     For more information, see [documentation](/partitioned-table.md#global-indexes).
 
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 * TiCDC supports replicating DDL statements in bi-directional replication (BDR) mode (GA) [#10301](https://github.com/pingcap/tiflow/issues/10301) [#48519](https://github.com/pingcap/tidb/issues/48519) @okJiang @asddongmen **tw@hfxsd** <!--1689-->
 
-    TiCDC v7.6.0 introduced the replication of DDL statements with bi-directional replication configured. Previously, replicating DDL statements was not supported by TiCDC, so users of TiCDC's bi-directional replication had to apply DDL statements to both TiDB clusters separately. With this feature, TiCDC allows for a cluster to be assigned the PRIMARY BDR role, and enables the replication of DDL statements from that cluster to the downstream cluster.
+    TiCDC v7.6.0 introduced the replication of DDL statements with bi-directional replication configured. Previously, bi-directional replication of DDL statements was not supported by TiCDC, so users of TiCDC's bi-directional replication had to execute DDL statements on both TiDB clusters separately. With this feature, after assigning a `PRIMARY` BDR role to a cluster, TiCDC can replicate the DDL statements from that cluster to the `SECONDARY` cluster.
 
     In v8.3.0, this feature becomes generally available (GA).
 
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 | TiKV  | [`coprocessor.region-max-size`](/tikv-configuration-file.md#region-max-size)  | Modified | Change the default value from `144` MiB to `384` MiB to accommodate the increase in `coprocessor.region-split-size` to `256` MiB. |
 | TiKV  | [`backup.sst-max-size`](/tikv-configuration-file.md#sst-max-size)  | Modified | Change the default value from `144` MiB to `384` MiB to accommodate the increase in `coprocessor.region-max-size` to `384` MiB. |
 
-| TiFlash   | [`security.redact_info_log`](/tiflash/tiflash-configuration.md#configure-the-tiflashtoml-file)  | Modified | Support setting the value of the TiFlash Server configuration item `security.redact-info-log' to `marker` to mark sensitive information in the log with single-angle quotation marks `‹›` instead of shielding it directly. With the `marker` option, you can customize the redaction rules.   |
 | TiFlash   | [`security.redact-info-log`](/tiflash/tiflash-configuration.md#configure-the-tiflash-learnertoml-file) | Modified |  Support setting the value of the TiFlash Learner configuration item `security.redact-info-log' to `marker` to mark sensitive information in the log with single-angle quotation marks `‹›` instead of shielding it directly. With the `marker` option, you can customize the redaction rules  |
 |  BR  |  [`--allow-pitr-from-incremental`](/br/br-incremental-guide.md#limitations)
 ) | Newly added  |   Controls whether incremental backups are compatible with subsequent log backups. The default value is `true`, which means that incremental backups are compatible with subsequent log backups. In the case of compatibility, the DDL to be played back is scrutinized before the incremental restore starts. |