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 ---
-title: "Terminus 3.6.0 release"
+title: "New self-serve command in Terminus 3.6.0 for renaming site labels"
 published_date: "2024-09-23"
 categories: [tools-apis, new-feature]
 ---
-Site labels can now be renamed self-serve via Terminus with the new `site:label:set` command. Previously, updating a site's label was only possible by contacting support.
+With the [Terminus 3.6.0 release](https://github.com/pantheon-systems/terminus/releases/tag/3.6.0), you can now rename site labels directly through Terminus using the new `site:label:set` command. Previously, updating a site's label required contacting Support.
 
-A site on Pantheon has both a machine name and a human-readable label.
-* Machine name (e.g., `my-awesome-site`): used in [Terminus commands](/terminus/examples#siteenv), constructs [platform domains](/guides/domains), and cannot be changed after site creation
-* Human-readable label (e.g., `My Awesome Site`): shown in the Pantheon workspace, site dashboards, and can be changed after site creation via Terminus. For example:  
+A site on Pantheon has both a machine name and a human-readable label:
+* **Machine name** (e.g., `my-awesome-site`): Used in [Terminus commands](/terminus/examples#siteenv), constructs [platform domains](/guides/domains), and cannot be changed after site creation.
+* **Human-readable label** (e.g., `My Awesome Site`): Shown in the Pantheon workspace and site dashboards. This label can be changed after site creation via Terminus. For example:  
 
 ```shell{promptUser: user}
 terminus site:label:set my-awesome-site "My Awesome Site D11"
 ```
 
-Upgrade today to leverage this new command.
+**Upgrade today to take advantage of this new command.**
 
-## Upgrade Terminus
-Installations managed by Homebrew on MacOS can update with the following command:
+## How to upgrade Terminus
+If you manage your installation via Homebrew on macOS, you can update Terminus with the following command:
 
 ```shell{promptUser: user}
 brew upgrade pantheon-systems/external/terminus
 ```
-See additional upgrade instructions for other systems [here](/terminus/install).
+For other systems, see additional upgrade instructions [here](/terminus/install).
 
-### Also added
-In addition to this new command, the [Terminus 3.6.0 release](https://github.com/pantheon-systems/terminus/releases/tag/3.6.0) also adds the following:
-- Track command success rates and execution time ([#2623](https://github.com/pantheon-systems/terminus/pull/2623))
+### Additional updates in Terminus 3.6.0
+Tracking of command success rates and execution time ([#2623](https://github.com/pantheon-systems/terminus/pull/2623)).