From 509b639d2a308e12b9618ebf14e3d364e36a4112 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: skyscooby <4450935+skyscooby@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 27 Nov 2024 10:24:21 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Update index.html

Technically tar and make are late 70's.. but 80's ?

Cleans up some over embellished Englsih.
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 index.html | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index d766dfb6..2d5314ea 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -101,9 +101,9 @@ <h3 class="ui header">For Users</h3>
         <p>
           Your users can always download the latest version of your software as binary packages for their operating system.
           They use the package management tools they are familiar with and will get your software just like they get software
-          from their OS supplier. They don't have to know about tarballs, make install, package formats or other stuff from the 90's.
+          from their OS supplier. They don't have to know about tarballs, make install, package formats or other stuff from the 80's.
           Once they are connected to your repository, you can serve them with maintenance or security updates and even add-ons
-          for your software. The OBS makes it a breeze for you, to make it super easy for them to enjoy your software!
+          for your software. The OBS makes it a breeze for you, and super simple for your users to enjoy your software!
         </p>
       </div>
       <div class="six wide right floated column">
@@ -119,11 +119,11 @@ <h3 class="ui header">For Users</h3>
       <div class="ten wide column">
         <h3 class="ui header">For Packagers</h3>
         <p>
-          The OBS builds your packages in a jailed environment that the OBS sets up from scratch each time and once your build succeeds
-          it also rebuilds all the depending packages for you. That way you get an automatic, consistent and reproducible build of
-          your software so you always know what you deliver to your users. There is also no need anymore for you to maintain a lot
-          of different OS installations on a lot of different hardware architectures or to deal with "compiler farms".
-          Let the OBS help you to concentrate on packaging, that's what you are here to do, right?
+          The OBS builds your packages in a jailed environment that the OBS sets up from scratch every time. Once successfully built
+          the OBS also rebuilds all the depending packages. That way you get an automatic, consistent and reproducible build of
+          your software, so you always know what you deliver to your users. There is no need for you to maintain a lot
+          of different OS installations, on many different hardware architectures, or to deal with "compiler farms".
+          Let the OBS help you concentrate on packaging, that's what you are here to do, right?
         </p>
       </div>
     </div>
@@ -137,8 +137,8 @@ <h3 class="ui header">For Free Software Projects and Independent Software Vendor
         <p>
           The OBS, through its project model, has collaboration built in and will help you to harness the power of the open source
           development model. Your developers get a one-stop-shop experience for all their software packaging and releasing needs.
-          The OBS API allows different clients and external services to interface and use its resources. Of course OBS is free software,
-          licensed under the GPL, and can be installed on your hardware, in your data center so you keep all your data under your control.
+          The OBS API allows different clients and external services to interface and use its resources. OBS is free software,
+          licensed under the GPL, and can be installed on your hardware, in your data center for complete control over your data.
         </p>
       </div>
       <div class="six wide right floated column">