Update Owning your career in an open organization

[LauraHilliger]

I've reviewed this article and started making adjustments. It's still highly relevant and I don't think it needs loads. Have been working in the original google doc:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LAInEJ67uFP-UL8aiw9XCViJlg_5xLBYAODyw2aed1g/edit

[amatlack]

I added a comma. 😆

[LauraHilliger]

We have one outstanding comment, but otherwise I think this is ready for review?

[semioticrobotic]

We have one outstanding comment, but otherwise I think this is ready for review?

Nice! Okay, @LauraHilliger. I will do my level best to review this and leave feedback by some time next week. 🤞

[semioticrobotic]

Added comments and made some line edits, @LauraHilliger and @amatlack! Thanks for your great work on this. Happy to take another look if you'd like, though I think we're on very solid ground here.