From 6cf4fb8153363cd8fc7d23ab0d91eea8aaa9801e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Brajeshwar Oinam <brajeshwar@oinam.com>
Date: Sun, 19 Nov 2023 10:28:10 +0530
Subject: [PATCH] Toning done my voice. This is getting more attention than I
 had expected.

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@@ -87,13 +87,17 @@ <h2>I chose a “Distraction-Free Phone” life.</h2>
   </main>
 
   <section>
-    <h3>Civlized Society</h3>
+    <h3>Society</h3>
 
-    <p>We should start treating loud ringing phones in public like smoking - an irritant and polluting agent for people around. Almost all phones have a way to indicate an incoming phone call -- be it the vibrate mode or the blinking light. It is possible not to have phones that ring every time there is an incoming call. The ideal solution should be a mandate to <strong>ban all loud phone sounds</strong> in public.</p>
+    <p>
+      We should start treating loud ringing phones in public like smoking - an irritant and polluting agent for people around. Almost all phones have a way to indicate an incoming phone call -- be it the vibrate mode or the blinking light. It is possible not to have phones that ring every time there is an incoming call.
+    </p>
     
     <h3>Phone Makers</h3>
     
-    <p>Phone makers can help transition to a better and civilized world by implementing silent phones by default.</p>
+    <p>
+      Phone makers can help transition to a better world by implementing silent phones by default.
+    </p>
     
     <ol>
       <li>Phones are on silent mode by default and have to explicitely turn the mode off (reverse of the current trend).</li>