From 18c643705375849ecfdce04067acd0d2b1c4013d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Carrie Warner (Mattermost)"
 <74422101+cwarnermm@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 18 Oct 2023 14:49:43 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] In-product notices can gather user feedback

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 source/manage/in-product-notices.rst | 21 ++++++++++++++++-----
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diff --git a/source/manage/in-product-notices.rst b/source/manage/in-product-notices.rst
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--- a/source/manage/in-product-notices.rst
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@@ -8,24 +8,35 @@ Mattermost in-product notices keep users and administrators informed of the newe
 
 .. contents:: On this page
   :local:
+  :depth: 1
 
 Administrator notices
 ---------------------
 
-Administrator notices inform System Admins when a new server version is available, when external dependencies are being deprecated, or when server upgrades are recommended due to ending support life cycles. System Admins may also receive notices about recommended server configuration options to optimize the user experience of their deployment.
+Administrator notices inform System Admins when:
+
+- A new Mattermost Server version is available, and when upgrades are required due to ending support life cycles.
+- External dependencies are being deprecated.
+- Mattermost recommends Server configuration options to optimize the user's product experience.
+- Mattermost is gathering user feedback to improve the product and user experience.
 
 .. image:: ../images/notices_admin.png
-   :alt: An example of an in-product administrator notice announcing that a new server version of Mattermost is available. Admin notices also announce when external dependencies are being deprecated, or when server upgrades or optimizations are recommended.
+   :alt: An example of an in-product administrator notice announcing that a new server version of Mattermost is available. Admin notices can be disabled.
    
-Administrator notices can be disabled in the **System Console > Site Configuration > Notices** page.
+System admins can disable end user notices by going to the **System Console > Site Configuration > Notices** page.
 
 End user notices
 ----------------
 
-End user notices are used to inform users and Admins of new feature enhancements and when new desktop versions are available. They can be disabled in **System Console > Site Configuration > Notices**.
+End user notices are used to inform all users when:
+
+- new desktop app versions and feature enhancements are available.
+- Mattermost is gathering user feedback to improve the product and user experience.
+
+System admins can disable end user notices by going to the **System Console > Site Configuration > Notices** page.
 
 .. image:: ../images/notices.png
-   :alt: An example of an end user in-product notice announcing that a new Mattermost Desktop App version is available. End user notices announce when new features and versions are available, and can be disabled.
+   :alt: An example of an end user in-product notice announcing that a new Mattermost desktop app release is available. End user notices can be disabled.
 
 Frequently asked questions (FAQs)
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