From e685038b4200c1c2706dcb7a57caa65def9f70f7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Allan=20Nordh=C3=B8y?= <epost@anotheragency.no>
Date: Mon, 29 Nov 2021 14:09:25 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 1/4] Reworked "About" page

---
 about.html | 31 +++++++++++++------------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/about.html b/about.html
index 4fdb0d2..0d60e90 100644
--- a/about.html
+++ b/about.html
@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@
 slug: about
 ---
 <p>
-LXQt is a lightweight Qt desktop environment.
+A light Qt desktop environment.
 </p>
 <p>
-It will not get in your way. It will not hang or slow down your system. It is focused
- on being a classic desktop with a modern look and feel. </p>
+The focused classic with a modern look and feel. An unhindered and clear way to go.
+</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li>Modular components</li>
@@ -22,24 +22,19 @@
 <h3>Applications</h3>
 
 <ul>
-<li>PcManFm-qt - File Manager</li>
-<li>Lximage-qt - Image Viewer</li>
-<li>QTerminal - Terminal Emulator</li>
-<li>Qps - Process Viewer</li>
-<li>Screengrab - Screen Capturer</li>
-<li>LXQt-archiver - Archive Manager</li>
-<li>LXQt-runner - Application launcher and calculator</li>
+<li>lxqt-runner — Launch applications and do calculations</li>
+<li>PCManFM-Qt — Browse files</li>
+<li>LXImage-Qt — View images</li>
+<li>QTerminal — Use the terminal</li>
+<li>ScreenGrab — Capture screenshots</li>
+<li>LXQt Archiver — Manage archives</li>
+<li>Qps — Manage processes</li>
 </ul>
 <br/>
 
-<p>LXQt is available for all major Linux and BSD distributions so you may just try it
-out on your system or in a VM.<br>
-More information about installing can be found in the
-<a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/">LXQt GitHub Wiki</a>.
+<p>Try LXQt in most Linux or BSD distributions.<br>
+Learn to install it on the <a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/">LXQt wiki</a>.
 </p>
 <p>
-Historically, LXQt was the product of the merge between LXDE-Qt, an initial Qt
-flavour of LXDE, and Razor-qt, a project aiming to develop a Qt based desktop environment.<br>
-More on this topic can be found in the
-<a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/History">Wiki</a>.
+Read more about its history in the <a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/History">LXQt wiki</a>.
 </p>

From 506b0e368af277ee131410cd8952cd53f62dea23 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Allan=20Nordh=C3=B8y?= <epost@anotheragency.no>
Date: Mon, 29 Nov 2021 14:11:58 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 2/4] Slogan already available in top banner removed

---
 about.html | 5 ++---
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/about.html b/about.html
index 0d60e90..043dfd4 100644
--- a/about.html
+++ b/about.html
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@
 slug: about
 ---
 <p>
-A light Qt desktop environment.
-</p>
+The focused classic with a modern look and feel.</p>
 <p>
-The focused classic with a modern look and feel. An unhindered and clear way to go.
+An unhindered and clear way to go.
 </p>
 
 <ul>

From 31f8801b8e3933203f60c3653eaa9c27c2a75de4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Allan=20Nordh=C3=B8y?= <epost@anotheragency.no>
Date: Mon, 29 Nov 2021 15:19:55 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 3/4] Spelling: in the wiki

---
 about.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/about.html b/about.html
index 043dfd4..3583c08 100644
--- a/about.html
+++ b/about.html
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ <h3>Applications</h3>
 <br/>
 
 <p>Try LXQt in most Linux or BSD distributions.<br>
-Learn to install it on the <a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/">LXQt wiki</a>.
+Learn to install it in the <a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/">LXQt wiki</a>.
 </p>
 <p>
 Read more about its history in the <a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/History">LXQt wiki</a>.

From cde723c57760f836a01ce2a9e4f302fb07289c7a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Allan=20Nordh=C3=B8y?= <epost@anotheragency.no>
Date: Mon, 29 Nov 2021 17:45:31 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 4/4] Corrections

---
 about.html | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/about.html b/about.html
index 3583c08..c411e2f 100644
--- a/about.html
+++ b/about.html
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@
 </p>
 
 <ul>
-<li>Modular components</li>
-<li>Powerful file manager</li>
-<li>Customize appearance everywhere</li>
-<li>Panel(s) with many plugins and settings</li>
-<li>Window Manager agnostic</li>
+<li>Get the full bundle or only the basics</li>
+<li>Enjoy the friendly file manager</li>
+<li>Customize the look and feel</li>
+<li>Configure panels and plugins</li>
+<li>Use any window manager you want</li>
 </ul>
 <br/>
 
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ <h3>Applications</h3>
 <br/>
 
 <p>Try LXQt in most Linux or BSD distributions.<br>
-Learn to install it in the <a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/">LXQt wiki</a>.
+Find out how on the <a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/">LXQt wiki</a>.
 </p>
 <p>
-Read more about its history in the <a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/History">LXQt wiki</a>.
+Read about its history in the <a href="https://github.com/lxqt/lxqt/wiki/History">LXQt wiki</a>.
 </p>