Student Feedback - Chapter 20

[jasonjabbour]

Chapter 20 - Conclusion

• This is a harder chapter for me to comment on given that it's up to Vijay's discretion how much he wants to recap the book. I also think that we're going to have to rewrite the conclusion anyways once we've edited all the other chapters, as this is a reflection of what we choose to include/emphasize in each.
• The verb tense changed every other sentence in this chapter -- I would probably opt for staying in past tense, but it doesn't really matter which tense we choose so long as it's consistent.
• I feel like you can probably cut down to having only three or four sentences overviewing each chapter. Alternatively, this could be a great place to include a graph, where you highlight one takeaway for each chapter (which could manage to minimize a lot of text).
  Chapter 20 - Conclusion .pdf

Originally posted by @sgiannuzzi39 in #256 (comment)