From c754e7d3a0a2c77a039267fd38049d6e00b7e222 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matt Linville Date: Fri, 4 Oct 2024 15:40:48 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] [DOC-9711] Improve ambiguous intra-page link text --- src/current/cockroachcloud/aws-privatelink.md | 12 +++++------- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/current/cockroachcloud/aws-privatelink.md b/src/current/cockroachcloud/aws-privatelink.md index 24dcb0feeec..f1aebd57aa3 100644 --- a/src/current/cockroachcloud/aws-privatelink.md +++ b/src/current/cockroachcloud/aws-privatelink.md @@ -163,17 +163,15 @@ Complete these steps once for each private endpoint in your AWS account that wil 1. Copy the **Service Name** shown in the connection dialog. - Make a note of the availability zones where your cluster is deployed in this region. + Make a note of the availability zones where your cluster is deployed in this region. 1. On the [Amazon VPC Console](https://console.aws.amazon.com/vpc/) in your AWS account, click **Your VPCs** in the sidebar. -1. Locate the VPC ID of the VPC you want to create your endpoint in. + Locate the VPC ID of the VPC you want to create your endpoint in, and make a note of its IPv4 CIDR. Cockroach Labs recommends that you use a VPC that has subnets in the availability zones where your cluster is deployed, and that your application or service is also deployed in the same availability zones. You can choose a different VPC for the private endpoint as long as it is peered to the VPC your application is running in and the private endpoint is configured to be DNS-accessible across the peered VPCs. -1. On the **Your VPCs** page, locate the IPv4 CIDR corresponding to the VPC you chose in [step 4](#step-4). -1. Click **Subnets** in the sidebar. -1. Locate the subnet IDs corresponding to the VPC you chose in [step 4](#step-4). +1. Click **Subnets** in the sidebar. Make a note of the subnet ID of each subnet that corresponds to your chosen VPC. 1. Click **Security Groups** in the sidebar. 1. Click **Create security group** to create a security group within your VPC. The security group allows inbound access from your application or source program on Port 26257: {{ security_group_substeps }} @@ -189,11 +187,11 @@ Use either the Amazon VPC Console or the [AWS Command Line Interface (CLI)](http 1. Click **Endpoints** in the sidebar. 1. Click **Create Endpoint**. 1. On the **Create Endpoint** page, for the **Service Category** field, select **Find service by name**. -1. In the **Service Name** field, enter the **Service Name** copied from the connection dialog in [Step 1](#step-1). +1. In the **Service Name** field, enter the **Service Name** you copied from the connection dialog in [Step 3. Create an AWS endpoint](#step-3-create-an-aws-endpoint). 1. Click **Verify**. 1. In the **VPC** field, enter the ID of the VPC you want to create your endpoint in. 1. Verify that the subnets are pre-populated. -1. In the **Security group** section, select the security group you created in [Step 8](#step-8) and uncheck the box for **default** security group. +1. In the **Security group** section, select the security group you created in [Step 3. Create an AWS endpoint](#step-3-create-an-aws-endpoint) and uncheck the box for **default** security group. 1. Click **Create Endpoint**. The VPC Endpoint ID displays. From 9a257abdc8c3c7e415c8ce221ef8e1477f049bc5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mike Lewis <76072290+mikeCRL@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 14 Oct 2024 10:53:53 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] Update a131639 to add COMMIT; at end of SQL code block --- src/current/advisories/a131639.md | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/src/current/advisories/a131639.md b/src/current/advisories/a131639.md index 1af32faad6b..6564386f581 100644 --- a/src/current/advisories/a131639.md +++ b/src/current/advisories/a131639.md @@ -91,6 +91,7 @@ BEGIN AS OF SYSTEM TIME '-10s'; SELECT count(*) FROM my_table@my_table_pkey WHERE pk = 1; SELECT count(*) FROM my_table@my_table_a_idx WHERE pk = 1 AND a=2; SELECT count(*) FROM my_table@my_table_b_idx WHERE pk = 1 AND b=3; +COMMIT; ~~~ If any of these queries return different values for `count`, that likely indicates a lost write. From bd0e01b29b2f4aa78a55a2e063f3920c028fa6c6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Florence Morris Date: Tue, 15 Oct 2024 11:26:47 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] In release.yml, fixed entries for v24.3.0-alpha.1 and v23.1.28. (#19013) --- src/current/_data/releases.yml | 37 +--------------------------------- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 36 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/current/_data/releases.yml b/src/current/_data/releases.yml index acf975f7bf8..a4d3a115d10 100644 --- a/src/current/_data/releases.yml +++ b/src/current/_data/releases.yml @@ -6888,41 +6888,6 @@ docker_arm_limited_access: false source: true previous_release: v23.1.27 - cloud_only: true - cloud_only_message_short: 'Available only for select CockroachDB Cloud clusters' - cloud_only_message: > - This version is currently available only for select - CockroachDB Cloud clusters. To request to upgrade - a CockroachDB self-hosted cluster to this version, - [contact support](https://support.cockroachlabs.com/hc/requests/new). - -- release_name: v24.3.0-alpha.2 - major_version: v24.3 - release_date: '2024-10-14' - release_type: Testing - go_version: go1.22.5 - sha: 58c475d67e32b75284b4fe293bff82807c3d129d - has_sql_only: true - has_sha256sum: true - mac: - mac_arm: true - mac_arm_experimental: true - mac_arm_limited_access: false - windows: true - linux: - linux_arm: true - linux_arm_experimental: false - linux_arm_limited_access: false - linux_intel_fips: true - linux_arm_fips: false - docker: - docker_image: cockroachdb/cockroach-unstable - docker_arm: true - docker_arm_experimental: false - docker_arm_limited_access: false - source: true - previous_release: v24.3.0-alpha.1 - - release_name: v24.3.0-alpha.2 major_version: v24.3 @@ -6949,4 +6914,4 @@ docker_arm_experimental: false docker_arm_limited_access: false source: true - previous_release: v24.3.0-alpha.1-218-g58c475d67e3 + previous_release: v24.3.0-alpha.1 From f1d7b82cfe96814831077e9c524c4a2684b82abe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matt Linville Date: Tue, 15 Oct 2024 09:00:43 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] Add link text to underspecified link --- src/current/_includes/releases/v24.3/v24.3.0-alpha.2.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/current/_includes/releases/v24.3/v24.3.0-alpha.2.md b/src/current/_includes/releases/v24.3/v24.3.0-alpha.2.md index fa00bc61c4e..317b4731bfd 100644 --- a/src/current/_includes/releases/v24.3/v24.3.0-alpha.2.md +++ b/src/current/_includes/releases/v24.3/v24.3.0-alpha.2.md @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Release Date: October 14, 2024 [#131857][#131857] -- The following ({% link v24.3/metrics.md %}) have been renamed: +- The following [metrics]({% link v24.3/metrics.md %}) have been renamed: Previous name | New name- -------------------------------------------------|-----------