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Author: kurtkuehnert

crates/bevy_render/src/render_phase/draw.rs

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ use std::{any::TypeId, fmt::Debug, hash::Hash};
 /// The the draw function can retrieve and query the required ECS data from the render world.
 ///
 /// This trait can either be implemented directly or implicitly composed out of multiple modular
-/// [`RenderCommand`]s.
+/// [`RenderCommand`]s. For more details and an example see the [`RenderCommand`] documentation.
 pub trait Draw<P: PhaseItem>: Send + Sync + 'static {
     /// Prepares the draw function to be used. This is called once and only once before the phase
     /// begins. There may be zero or more `draw` calls following a call to this function.

crates/bevy_render/src/render_phase/mod.rs

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ pub use rangefinder::*;
 use bevy_ecs::prelude::*;
 use std::ops::Range;
 
-/// A collection of all [`PhaseItem`]s for a single rendering phase for a single view.
+/// A collection of all rendering instructions, that will be executed by the GPU, for a single rendering phase for a single view.
 ///
 /// Each view (camera, or shadow-casting light, etc.) can have one or multiple render phases.
 /// They are used to queue entities for rendering.