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Author: nicopap

crates/bevy_hierarchy/src/child_builder.rs

@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@ impl Command for RemoveChildren {
 
 /// Command that removes the parent of an entity, and removes that entity from the parent's [`Children`].
 pub struct RemoveParent {
-    /// `Entity` which parent must be removed.
+    /// `Entity` whose parent must be removed.
     pub child: Entity,
 }
 
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ impl<'w, 's, 'a> ChildBuilder<'w, 's, 'a> {
         e
     }
 
-    /// Spawns an [`Entity`] with no components and inserts it into the children defined by the [`ChildBuilder`] which adds the [`Parent`] component to it.
+    /// Spawns an [`Entity`] with no components and inserts it into the children defined by the [`ChildBuilder`] whose adds the [`Parent`] component to it.
     pub fn spawn_empty(&mut self) -> EntityCommands<'w, 's, '_> {
         let e = self.commands.spawn_empty();
         self.push_children.children.push(e.id());
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ impl<'w> WorldChildBuilder<'w> {
         self.world.entity_mut(entity)
     }
 
-    /// Spawns an [`Entity`] with no components and inserts it into the children defined by the [`WorldChildBuilder`] which adds the [`Parent`] component to it.
+    /// Spawns an [`Entity`] with no components and inserts it into the children defined by the [`WorldChildBuilder`] whose adds the [`Parent`] component to it.
     pub fn spawn_empty(&mut self) -> EntityMut<'_> {
         let entity = self.world.spawn(Parent(self.parent)).id();
         push_child_unchecked(self.world, self.parent, entity);

crates/bevy_transform/src/commands.rs

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ use crate::{GlobalTransform, Transform};
 /// Command similar to [`AddChild`], but updating the child transform to keep
 /// it at the same [`GlobalTransform`].
 ///
-/// You most likely want to use [`BuildChildrenTransformExt::set_parent_keep_global_transform`]
+/// You most likely want to use [`BuildChildrenTransformExt::set_parent_in_place`]
 /// method on [`EntityCommands`] instead.
 pub struct AddChildInPlace {
     /// Parent entity to add the child to.
@@ -40,11 +40,11 @@ impl Command for AddChildInPlace {
 /// Command similar to [`RemoveParent`], but updating the child transform to keep
 /// it at the same [`GlobalTransform`].
 ///
-/// You most likely want to use [`BuildChildrenTransformExt::remove_parent_keep_global_transform`]
+/// You most likely want to use [`BuildChildrenTransformExt::remove_parent_in_place`]
 /// method on [`EntityCommands`] instead.
-struct RemoveParentInPlace {
-    /// `Entity` which parent must be removed.
-    child: Entity,
+pub struct RemoveParentInPlace {
+    /// `Entity` whose parent must be removed.
+    pub child: Entity,
 }
 impl Command for RemoveParentInPlace {
     fn write(self, world: &mut World) {

examples/transforms/global_vs_local_translation.rs

@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ fn setup(
                 }),
                 ..default()
             },
-            ChangeGlobal,
+            ChangeLocal,
             Move,
             ToggledBy(KeyCode::Key1),
         ))