From 98d48ef65f654ce0a7503a36799953724af11250 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mark Taylor <138604938+mtaylorgds@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 18 Feb 2025 16:03:59 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Update the student finance calculator start page

---
 .../student_finance_calculator_flow/start.erb | 26 +++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/flows/student_finance_calculator_flow/start.erb b/app/flows/student_finance_calculator_flow/start.erb
index ef4cce13e8d..ba7b6a03534 100644
--- a/app/flows/student_finance_calculator_flow/start.erb
+++ b/app/flows/student_finance_calculator_flow/start.erb
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 <% text_for :title do %>
-  Student finance calculator
+  Check how much student finance you could get
 <% end %>
 
 <% text_for :meta_description do %>
-  Student finance calculator - get a quick estimate of what student loans, grants, bursaries and other funding you could get - for full-time, and  part-time students
+  Check how much student finance you could get - get a quick estimate of what student loans, grants, bursaries and other funding you could get - for full-time, and  part-time students
 <% end %>
 
 <% govspeak_for :body do %>
@@ -11,21 +11,21 @@
 
   - 2024 to 2025
   - 2025 to 2026
-  
-  You'll need to [check if you're eligible for tuition fees and living costs (full support) or tuition fee-only funding before you start](https://www.gov.uk/student-finance/who-qualifies).
+
+  ^ You cannot use the calculator if you’re [a student from Scotland](https://www.saas.gov.uk/), [a student from Wales](https://www.studentfinancewales.co.uk/) or [a student from Northern Ireland](https://www.studentfinanceni.co.uk/).
   
   Use this calculator to estimate:
   
   - how much student loan you could get
   - extra funding, for example if you’re disabled or have children
   
-  Your result will be more accurate if you know your annual household income (your parents’ or partner’s income plus your own).
-<% end %>
+  ## Before you start
 
-<% govspeak_for :post_body do %>
-  You must check what loans you’re eligible for before you start.
-  
-  If you’re a part-time student you’ll need to know how many credits you’ll study and how many credits a full-time student would study.
-  
-  You cannot use the calculator if you’re from [Scotland](http://www.saas.gov.uk/), [Wales](http://www.studentfinancewales.co.uk/) or [Northern Ireland](http://www.studentfinanceni.co.uk/).
-<% end %>
\ No newline at end of file
+  To use the calculator, you need to know what [type of funding you’re eligible for](/student-finance/who-qualifies) (Tuition Fee Loan and Maintenance Loan or Tuition Fee Loan only).
+
+  If you're eligible for a Maintenance Loan, you'll need to know your annual household income (your parents’ or partner’s income plus your own).
+
+  If you’re a part-time student, you'll also need to know how many credits you’ll study and how many credits a full-time student would study.
+
+  ##Calculate how much you could get
+<% end %>