diff --git a/messages/strings/cam1strings.txt b/messages/strings/cam1strings.txt index 9a30240..95cfaba 100644 --- a/messages/strings/cam1strings.txt +++ b/messages/strings/cam1strings.txt @@ -93,62 +93,62 @@ ROYAMSG10 _("Now, I have more pressing matters to attend too. My forces will m ROYAMSG11 _("Hide as you do James, you cannot do so forever.") /* Royalist Message after destroying the south base (Resistance Eradicated) */ -ROYEMSG1 _("Well now would you look at that. Seems like there's someone new in town!") -ROYEMSG2 _("I've gotta hand it to you kid, you've got some real guts messing with my things.") -ROYEMSG3 _("You must not be from around here, isn't that right?") -ROYEMSG4 _("And if the Resistance isn't with you...") +ROYEMSG1 _("It appears a stranger has come to Kindgom, quite the brute it seems.") +ROYEMSG2 _("Even managed to remove a small detachment of my forces from their foothold. Quite the... accomplishment.") +ROYEMSG3 _("Clearly you're not trained in the ways of warfare from the Old King.") +ROYEMSG4 _("I guess the Kingdom owes you a measure of thanks for having dealt with the Resistance.") ROYEMSG5 _("...") -ROYEMSG6 _("You've got no idea who you are messing with, do you? Do you even realize who I am?") -ROYEMSG7 _("I'm the Queen of the Royalists, and this is MY kingdom you're stepping on.") -ROYEMSG8 _("I have more pressing matters to attend to for now, but I'll be seeing you around, buddy.") +ROYEMSG6 _("I think not! Arrogance, over-confidence, nor luck will not see you succeed against a superior military.") +ROYEMSG7 _("Be warned stranger, I'm the Queen of the Royalists, and this is MY kingdom!") +ROYEMSG8 _("Any further action against my forces will see your end. Consider your next move wisely.") /* AMPHOS Introduction (From Resistance) */ -RESAMPMSG1 _("That base belongs to AMPHOS. They mostly operate in the East Lake, and they use hovercrafts to move between their islands.") -RESAMPMSG2 _("They've actually been around since before the fall of the old kingdom, operating as their own independent economic/military hybrid controlling traffic through the East Lake area.") -RESAMPMSG3 _("But after the King passed, AMPHOS became one of the two large factions that fought against the Royalists.") -RESAMPMSG4 _("AMPHOS saw the King's death as an opportunity to expand their influence grow their own territory.") -RESAMPMSG5 _("They were a real pain in the rear too, since their hovers were so fast they could fire barrages of rockets and then flee before taking any real damage.") -RESAMPMSG6 _("... Anyway, at some point the Royalists' own hovers started to catch up to AMPHOS, and eventually managed to get them to 'negotiate' an alliance.") -RESAMPMSG7 _("In what became known as the 'East Lake Deal', the Royalists had gained free access to the Eastern Lake and pacified one of their largest sources of pain.") -RESAMPMSG8 _("But with how much the Royalists grown in strength, I'm not sure AMPHOS acts much more than a puppet for them at this point.") +RESAMPMSG1 _("Commander, that base belongs to AMPHOS. They mostly operate in the East Lake area, utilising hovercrafts to move between islands within their control.") +RESAMPMSG2 _("They've actually been around since before the fall of the Old Kingdom, operating as their own independent hybrid economic and military, controlling traffic through the East Lake.") +RESAMPMSG3 _("After the King passed, AMPHOS became one of the two larger factions that fought against the Royalists.") +RESAMPMSG4 _("AMPHOS saw the King's death as an opportunity to expand their influence, grow their own territory.") +RESAMPMSG5 _("They were a real pain too, since their hovercrafts excel a hit-and-run tactics, leaving slower or less prepared foes no time to react.") +RESAMPMSG6 _("... Anyway, at some point the Royalists' acquired their own hovercrafts and quickly surpassed AMPHOS' tactics, which eventually led to an alliance between them both.") +RESAMPMSG7 _("In what became known as the 'East Lake Deal', the Royalists had gained free access to the East Lake and pacified one of their largest sources of retaliation.") +RESAMPMSG8 _("With how much the Royalists grown in strength, AMPHOS acts much more like a puppet state than an equal ally.") RESAMPMSG9 _("...") -RESAMPMSG10 _("The Royalists must have used that base to get past the Hellraisers.") -RESAMPMSG11 _("We'll need to clear it out to make sure the Royalists don't come back again.") +RESAMPMSG10 _("History lesson aside, it seems the only logical explanation that The Royalists must have used that base to get past the Hellraisers.") +RESAMPMSG11 _("We'll need to clear it out to make sure the Royalists don't set up camp here again.") /* AMPHOS Pitch (From Resistance) */ -RESAMPPITCHMSG1 _("Commander, we have been contacted by someone describing herself as an associate of the AMPHOS board of directors.") +RESAMPPITCHMSG1 _("Commander, we have been contacted by someone describing herself as an Associate of the AMPHOS board of directors.") RESAMPPITCHMSG2 _("She claims that she is sympathetic to our cause, and is willing to pull some strings among the higher-ups in AMPHOS in order to start negotiations.") -RESAMPPITCHMSG3 _("But she will need some help to convince the rest of the board.") -RESAMPPITCHMSG4 _("According to the associate, there has been a rising sense of fear among AMPHOS leadership since the East Lake Deal that the Royalists are preparing to turn against them once the opportunity arises.") -RESAMPPITCHMSG5 _("She thinks she can exploit this to get AMPHOS on our side.") -RESAMPPITCHMSG6 _("The Royalists have established a presence in the waters of the East Lake by building a base on the northwest island.") -RESAMPPITCHMSG7 _("They also have assigned a commander to patrol the northern waters of the East Lake.") -RESAMPPITCHMSG8 _("If you can eliminate that Royalist commander and clear out that base, and then give way to allow AMPHOS to build their own base on that island, she thinks she can arrange a negotiation.") -RESAMPPITCHMSG9 _("The trouble is, that Royalist base is quite far away, and there's a lot of AMPHOS defenses in the way.") -RESAMPPITCHMSG10 _("But according to the associate, as long as you stay clear of the AMPHOS main base, she should still be able to get the rest of the AMPHOS board to sign on to negotiations.") +RESAMPPITCHMSG3 _("But she will need some evidence to convince the rest of the board.") +RESAMPPITCHMSG4 _("According to this Associate, there has been a rising sense of fear among AMPHOS leadership since the East Lake Deal. That the Royalists are preparing to turn against them once the opportunity arises.") +RESAMPPITCHMSG5 _("She thinks she can exploit this paranoia to get AMPHOS on our side.") +RESAMPPITCHMSG6 _("The Royalists have established a presence in the waters of the East Lake by building a base on the most northern of AMPOHS' islands.") +RESAMPPITCHMSG7 _("They also have assigned a commander group to patrol the surround areas of that base as well.") +RESAMPPITCHMSG8 _("If you can eliminate that Royalist commander, destroy the Royalist base, and allow AMPHOS to reclaim the northern island, she claims it wil be conclusive evidence to begin negotiations.") +RESAMPPITCHMSG9 _("The trouble is, that Royalist base in question is quite far to the north, and there's a lot of AMPHOS defenses and patrols in the way.") +RESAMPPITCHMSG10 _("According to the Associate, as long as you stay clear of the AMPHOS main base, she should still be able to get the rest of the AMPHOS board to agree to negotiations.") /* AMPHOS Pitch (Resistance Eradicated) */ AMPPITCHMSG1 _("Greetings Commander, I am a member of the AMPHOS board of directors.") AMPPITCHMSG2 _("I have observed your interactions with AMPHOS and Royalist forces so far, and I believe we are not truly enemies.") AMPPITCHMSG3 _("While AMPHOS may have provided itself with a degree of temporary safety in its alliance with the Royalists, I, and others on this board, have found evidence that the Royalists may be preparing to turn on us whenever it most benefits them.") AMPPITCHMSG4 _("This is where you come in.") -AMPPITCHMSG5 _("If you can remove the Royalist presence in the East Lake and allow our trucks to build on the large islands, I can convince the rest of the board that allying with you is more beneficial than remaining ignorant of the Royalists growing plans to backstab us.") +AMPPITCHMSG5 _("If you can remove the Royalist presence in the East Lake and allow our trucks to build on the large island in our Northern border, I can convince the rest of the board that allying with you is more beneficial than remaining ignorant of the Royalists growing plans to backstab us.") AMPPITCHMSG6 _("Just keep your distance from our main island base, and I'll keep working on softening up the board, OK?") /* Message telling the player to evacuate AMPHOS islands (From Resistance) */ -RESAMPEVACMSG1 _("Nice work!") +RESAMPEVACMSG1 _("EXcellent work Commander!") RESAMPEVACMSG2 _("With that Royalist base cleared, we're one step closer to securing negotiations with AMPHOS.") RESAMPEVACMSG3 _("Now you need to let AMPHOS reclaim all of their island territories.") RESAMPEVACMSG4 _("Just remove all of your units and structures from those islands, and AMPHOS should reclaim them shortly.") RESAMPEVACMSG5 _("...") -RESAMPEVACMSG6 _("AMPHOS is really making us jump through a lot of hoops for this.") +RESAMPEVACMSG6 _("I don't like how AMPHOS is making us work more for a negotiation than they are able too themselves.") RESAMPEVACMSG7 _("Well, at least the hard part is over.") -RESAMPEVACMSG8 _("Here's to hoping that associate makes good on her promise...") +RESAMPEVACMSG8 _("Here's to hoping that Associate makes good on her words...") /* If the player hasn't destroyed the Royalist commander yet */ -RESAMPEVACMSG3ALT _("Next, you'll need to take out that Royalist hover commander.") -RESAMPEVACMSG4ALT _("Then, just remove all of your units and structures from the islands that AMPHOS wants.") -RESAMPEVACMSG5ALT _("That should be enough to show them that we're on the same side.") -RESAMPEVACMSG7ALT _("Well, at least we're almost done here.") +RESAMPEVACMSG3ALT _("Great work so far, next target is the patrolling Royalist commander.") +RESAMPEVACMSG4ALT _("Then, remove all of your units and structures from the islands that AMPHOS wants.") +RESAMPEVACMSG5ALT _("That should be enough evidence that we're all on the same side.") +RESAMPEVACMSG7ALT _("Well, one down one to go.") /* Message telling the player to evacuate AMPHOS islands (Resistance Eradicated) */ AMPEVACMSG1 _("Excellent work, Commander.") @@ -160,26 +160,26 @@ AMPEVACMSG2ALT _("Now all that's left is to destroy that Royalist commander.") AMPEVACMSG3ALT _("Once you've dealt with them, simply remove your units and structures from the large islands.") /* AMPHOS Negotiation Message */ -AMPNEGOMSG1 _("Well, it appears that Alice was right about you.") -AMPNEGOMSG2 _("You've managed to push back against the Royalists and cleared us breathing room.") +AMPNEGOMSG1 _("Good day Commander, it appears Alice was correct about you.") +AMPNEGOMSG2 _("You've succesfully managed to push back against the Royalists and cleared us breathing room.") AMPNEGOMSG3 _("And you've not only done so by yourself, without any assistance from us, but also while our forces were actively working against you.") -AMPNEGOMSG4 _("You really are something incredible; do not think we will forget this extraordinary favor that you have done for us.") +AMPNEGOMSG4 _("An incredible performance; do not think we will forget this extraordinary favor that you have done for us.") AMPNEGOMSG5 _("Commander, as president of the AMPHOS board of directors, I hereby offer to negotiate an alliance with you at the designated location.") AMPNEGOMSG6 _("Once the negotiations are through, we will share our technology and support your forces as you strike back against the Royalists!") AMPNEGOMSG7 _("...") -AMPNEGOMSG8 _("Although, we WILL need to charge you to compensate for any and all damage you have previously caused AMPHOS.") -AMPNEGOMSG9 _("Hey-hey, no hard feelings, but it's a business!") +AMPNEGOMSG8 _("Although, we will need to charge you to compensate for any and all damage you have previously caused AMPHOS.") +AMPNEGOMSG9 _("No hard feelings Commander, it's just business.") /* AMPHOS Negotiation Message (All other factions Eradicated) */ AMPNEGOALLEMSG1 _("Well, Commander.") AMPNEGOALLEMSG2 _("You've managed to push back against the Royalists and cleared us breathing room.") AMPNEGOALLEMSG3 _("And so, as president of the AMPHOS board of directors, you have my thanks.") AMPNEGOALLEMSG4 _("...") -AMPNEGOALLEMSG5 _("But, we are aware of your actions across the kingdom.") -AMPNEGOALLEMSG6 _("The violence that you have caused, the lengths you have gone.") +AMPNEGOALLEMSG5 _("But, we are aware of your actions across the Kingdom.") +AMPNEGOALLEMSG6 _("The violence that you have caused, the lengths you have gone too.") AMPNEGOALLEMSG7 _("...") -AMPNEGOALLEMSG8 _("It is hard you would ally with us after all that you have done.") -AMPNEGOALLEMSG9 _("You have have helped us today, so we will repay your kindness.") +AMPNEGOALLEMSG8 _("It is difficult to believe that you would want to ally with us after all that you have done.") +AMPNEGOALLEMSG9 _("Though you have have helped us today, so we will repay your kindness.") AMPNEGOALLEMSG10 _("I have sent a truck to negotiate an alliance with you at the designated location.") /* AMPHOS Aggro'd Message */ @@ -197,36 +197,36 @@ AMPBTRYMSG5 _("We will blow your inferior hovercrafts out of the water, and th AMPBTRYMSG6 _("In due time you'll be begging us for mercy!") /* Royalist Message after allying with AMPHOS */ -ROYAMPAMSG1 _("Wow.") -ROYAMPAMSG2 _("You're REALLY proving yourself to be quite a nuisance, aren't you?") -ROYAMPAMSG3 _("I honestly didn't think those snobby, self-absorbed half-wits at AMPHOS had it in them to turn against me at this point.") -ROYAMPAMSG4 _("But let me get one thing straight with you, Commander: this will change nothing.") -ROYAMPAMSG5 _("It doesn't matter how much you try to fight it, nothing will stop me from unifying my kingdom.") +ROYAMPAMSG1 _("Well well, you, again.") +ROYAMPAMSG2 _("You really are proving yourself to be quite the nuisance, aren't you?") +ROYAMPAMSG3 _("I honestly didn't think those snobby, self-absorbed half-wits at AMPHOS had it in them to turn against me.") +ROYAMPAMSG4 _("Let me make this perfectly clear to you Commander: this changes nothing.") +ROYAMPAMSG5 _("It doesn't matter how much you fight against it, nothing will prevent me from unifying my rightful kingdom.") ROYAMPAMSG6 _("AMPHOS' betrayal is only delaying the inevitable.") ROYAMPAMSG7 _("I assure you, this won't end well. Neither for you or those backstabbing cowards at AMPHOS.") /* Royalist Message after eradicating AMPHOS */ -ROYAMPEMSG1 _("Bravo, Commander!") -ROYAMPEMSG2 _("You really showed those AMPHOS cowards who's boss.") -ROYAMPEMSG3 _("So credit where credit's due, you've saved me the trouble of having to wipe them out myself, so I thank you for taking it upon yourself to take out the trash.") -ROYAMPEMSG4 _("Now there's one less hassle I need to overcome before my kingdom has been reunified.") +ROYAMPEMSG1 _("Bravo Commander!") +ROYAMPEMSG2 _("You really have showed those AMPHOS cowards what ambition looks like.") +ROYAMPEMSG3 _("Credit where it's due, you have saved me the trouble of having to wipe them out myself.") +ROYAMPEMSG4 _("One less hassle later on in re-unifying my kingdom.") ROYAMPEMSG5 _("What? Did you really think that alliance was going to last?") -ROYAMPEMSG6 _("AMPHOS was not loyal to me, they only had their own interests in mind.") +ROYAMPEMSG6 _("AMPHOS were never loyal to me, they only had their own interests in mind.") ROYAMPEMSG7 _("And there is only one cure for that.") ROYAMPEMSG8 _("...") -ROYAMPEMSG9 _("Oh, don't worry Commander. Your turn is coming up soon.") +ROYAMPEMSG9 _("Oh don't worry Commander. Your turn is coming... soon.") /* Hellraiser Introduction (From Resistance) */ RESHELMSG1 _("Careful, those structures in the hills belong to the Hellraisers.") -RESHELMSG2 _("The Hellraisers are super territorial. They've probably held out there since the fall of the old kingdom.") -RESHELMSG3 _("We've tried to reach out and negotiate with them in the past, but they're apparently pretty... unreceptive of outsiders.") +RESHELMSG2 _("The Hellraisers are super territorial. They've probably held out there since the fall of the Old Kingdom.") +RESHELMSG3 _("We've tried to reach out and negotiate with them in the past, but they're apparently very... unreceptive of outsiders.") RESHELMSG4 _("Fortunately for us, they usually don't go far out of their own territory.") RESHELMSG5 _("Unfortunately, they control the only land routes to get across the river to the north.") -RESHELMSG6 _("So at some point, we're going to have to deal with them.") -RESHELMSG7 _("Just be cautious when in their territory, that whole place is one big death trap.") -RESHELMSG8 _("Those cragged hills don't leave much room for maneuvering around. And the Hellraisers are fanatical about incendiary weapons.") -RESHELMSG9 _("Their patrols are armed with flamethrowers, and they've placed flamers around every corner.") -RESHELMSG10 _("They've even modified their mortars to leave burning areas where they hit.") +RESHELMSG6 _("At some point we're going to have to deal with them.") +RESHELMSG7 _("Be cautious when in their territory, it's designed as a gauntlet for trespassers.") +RESHELMSG8 _("Those cragged hills don't leave much room for maneuvering, coupled with the Hellraisers preference for incendiary weapons.") +RESHELMSG9 _("Their patrols are armed with flamethrowers, and they've placed flamer defenses around every corner.") +RESHELMSG10 _("They've even modified their mortars to scorch areas where their shells land.") /* Hellraiser Bridge Warning (From Resistance) */ RESHELWARN1 _("Heads up Commander, that bridge leads straight into Royalist territory.") @@ -241,29 +241,29 @@ HELPITCHMSG4 _("While your skill in leading your forces in combat is remarkable HELPITCHMSG5 _("If you dare continue forwards, we will show you no mercy.") HELPITCHMSG6 _("We will burn your units to ash, and raze your structures to the ground until nothing remains.") HELPITCHMSG7 _("...") -HELPITCHMSG8 _("However, if you turn back now, and allow us to repair the damage that you have caused, then we may be willing to negotiate a more peaceful resolution to this conflict.") +HELPITCHMSG8 _("However, if you turn back now and allow us to reclaim what is ours, we may be willing to negotiate a truce.") HELPITCHMSG9 _("The choice is yours, Commander.") /* Hellraiser Negotiation Message */ -HELNEGOMSG1 _("It seems you have some common sense after all.") +HELNEGOMSG1 _("It seems you understand our honor in our words.") HELNEGOMSG2 _("You've ended your attacks against us, and allowed us to reclaim all of our territory.") -HELNEGOMSG3 _("And you have earned my personal respect, Commander.") +HELNEGOMSG3 _("And, you have earned my personal respect, Commander.") HELNEGOMSG4 _("I have sent a truck to begin negotiations for an alliance.") -HELNEGOMSG5 _("Once they are complete, we can then join our forces and incinerate any Royalist who dares to stand in our path!") +HELNEGOMSG5 _("Once they are complete, we will join our forces and incinerate any enemy who dares to stand in our path!") /* Hellraiser Aggro'd Message */ -HELAGGRMSG1 _("Well, it seems you have made the wrong choice!") +HELAGGRMSG1 _("That is the choice you have made.") HELAGGRMSG2 _("You are very brave, Commander. But also very foolish if you think you can best us.") -HELAGGRMSG3 _("These transgressions of yours shall not go unpunished!") -HELAGGRMSG4 _("We will purge your forces from our land like a wildfire tearing through a forest.") -HELAGGRMSG5 _("Perhaps once we've razed your vile base down to smoldering piles of ash, we will hear you beg for our mercy!") +HELAGGRMSG3 _("It is war you have chosen and it is war you shall have!") +HELAGGRMSG4 _("We will purge your forces from our land like wildfire, scorch everything of yours that remains") +HELAGGRMSG5 _("Once we've razed your vile base down to ash, we will hear you beg for mercy.") /* Hellraiser Betrayal Message */ -HELBTRYMSG1 _("Huh?") -HELBTRYMSG2 _("You encroach on our base, pull back and let us recover, only to attack us again?") -HELBTRYMSG3 _("Your tactics confuse me, Commander.") -HELBTRYMSG4 _("But if you think we'll play along with these back-and-forth shenanigans, then you are about to be VERY sorely mistaken!") -HELBTRYMSG5 _("Maybe once we've burnt your units to a crisp, we'll hear you beg for forgiveness!") +HELBTRYMSG1 _("What madness is this!?") +HELBTRYMSG2 _("You attack our base, retreat to let us recover, only to attack us again?") +HELBTRYMSG3 _("Your cat and mouse game is aggravating, Commander.") +HELBTRYMSG4 _("This madness stops now, no longer we offer negotiation, war is the only answer.") +HELBTRYMSG5 _("Once we've burnt your units and structures to ash, we will hear you beg for mercy!") /* Coalition Pitch (Both Hellraisers and Resistance Allied) */ COAPITCHMSG1 _("So, you're the Commander I've heard so much about.") @@ -296,24 +296,24 @@ COAWARN2MSG6 _("Oh, and tell the leader of the 'Resistance' that I know EXACTLY /* Coalition Introduction after either their pitch or warning (From Resistance) */ RESCOAMSG1 _("That message was from leader of the Coalition, Max.") RESCOAMSG2 _("There is no faction that the Royalists, or the Queen herself, hates more than the Coalition.") -RESCOAMSG3 _("The Coalition was the first major group that formed once the old kingdom fell, with the sole purpose of putting a permanent end to the King's bloodline.") -RESCOAMSG4 _("Max is... well he's quite the lively character as they say. Haha...") +RESCOAMSG3 _("The Coalition was the first major group that formed once the Old Kingdom fell, with the sole purpose of putting a permanent end to the King's bloodline.") +RESCOAMSG4 _("Max is... quite the lively character. I'd rather be on his side...") RESCOAMSG5 _("...") /* This gets added to the message when following the Coalition's Pitch */ -RESCOAPITCHMSG1 _("So, Max wants us to destroy that base for him, huh?") -RESCOAPITCHMSG2 _("That's not gonna be easy, the Royalists have that place well fortified.") -RESCOAPITCHMSG3 _("It seems kinda scummy to make us destroy that base for him, instead of working together to take it down.") -RESCOAPITCHMSG4 _("But hey, at least we've got your back, and we've got the Hellraisers working with us too.") -RESCOAPITCHMSG4ALT _("But hey, at least we've got your back, and we've got the Hellraisers and AMPHOS working with us too.") -RESCOAPITCHMSG5 _("The Coalition would be one heck of an ally to have on our side against the Royalists.") -RESCOAPITCHMSG6 _("But it's your call how you wanna do this.") +RESCOAPITCHMSG1 _("So Max wants us to destroy a Royalist base for him.") +RESCOAPITCHMSG2 _("That's not an easy task, the Royalists have that area well fortified and he knows it.") +RESCOAPITCHMSG3 _("I wouldn't want to think him lazy or taking advantage. Surely it would be a better approach that both we and the Coalition work together on this endeavour?") +RESCOAPITCHMSG4 _("Thankfully, we've got the Hellraisers working with us, so that lessens the burden somewhat.") +RESCOAPITCHMSG4ALT _("Thankfully, we've got the Hellraisers and AMPHOS working with us, which can provide a joint assault on multiple fronts") +RESCOAPITCHMSG5 _("Regardless the measure of this request, the reward would be greatly benefical against the Royalists, considering how they've managed to hold their own againest the Royalists for this long.") +RESCOAPITCHMSG6 _("But, it's your call Commander.") /* This gets added to the message when following the Coalition's Warning */ -RESCOAWARNMSG1 _("... And he r-really likes to trash talk, huh?") -RESCOAWARNMSG2 _("Commander, I think we should think about our next moves v-very carefully.") -RESCOAWARNMSG3 _("The Coalition might not have the tech the Royalists have, but they've been hardened by months of non-stop fighting, and they do NOT mess around.") +RESCOAWARNMSG1 _("As I'm sure you can tell, his lively character can be seen though is choice of wording.") +RESCOAWARNMSG2 _("Commander, I think we should think about our next move very carefully.") +RESCOAWARNMSG3 _("The Coalition might not have the technology the Royalists have, but they've been hardened by months of continual fighting and they do not mess around.") RESCOAWARNMSG4 _("If you think we can take on the Coalition, I trust your judgment.") -RESCOAWARNMSG5 _("If not, then well, it looks like we better heed his advice...") -RESCOAWARNMSG6 _("Just be careful, Okay?") +RESCOAWARNMSG5 _("Otherwise, we best heed his advice.") +RESCOAWARNMSG6 _("It's your call Commander.") /* Coalition Negotiation Message */ COANEGOMSG1 _("Well done, Commander!") @@ -441,32 +441,32 @@ COAERADTAUNTMSG19 _("You just might be the worst thing to happen to this kingdom COAERADTAUNTMSG20 _("I'll turn your tanks and cyborgs into scrap metal, and then wipe you off the continent!") /* Coalition Eradication Message (From Resistance) */ -RESCOAERADMSG1 _("I suppose I should explain myself to you, Commander.") -RESCOAERADMSG2 _("What Max told you is no lie, it is true that am the King's son.") +RESCOAERADMSG1 _("I suppose an explain is in order, Commander.") +RESCOAERADMSG2 _("What Max has said is no lie, I am the King's son.") RESCOAERADMSG3 _("...") -RESCOAERADMSG4 _("I served under my sister's rule for quite some time after she took power. In fact, I was the man in charge of keeping AMPHOS at bay while so the rest of the Royalist forces could fight the Coalition.") -RESCOAERADMSG5 _("I was the one who got AMPHOS to agree to the East Lake Deal.") -RESCOAERADMSG6 _("At the time, those at the higher levels of AMPHOS probably saw the East Lake Deal as a sort of 'get out of jail free card'. Royalist hover technology was catching up to AMPHOS rapidly, and both sides knew it wouldn't be long before the Royalists overtook AMPHOS in amphibious military power.") -RESCOAERADMSG7 _("But after AMPHOS was dealt with, my sister, the Queen, assigned me to help in the fight against the Coalition.") +RESCOAERADMSG4 _("I served under my sister's rule for quite some time after she took the throne. I was in charge of keeping AMPHOS at bay while Royalist forces could fight the Coalition.") +RESCOAERADMSG5 _("I was front row at the negotiation table with AMPHOS for the East Lake Deal.") +RESCOAERADMSG6 _("At the time, those at the higher levels in AMPHOS probably saw the East Lake Deal as an easy means to resolve a difficult situation. Royalist hover technology was catching up to AMPHOS rapidly, and both sides knew it wouldn't be long before the Royalists overtook AMPHOS in amphibious military power.") +RESCOAERADMSG7 _("After the East Lake deal was agreed, my sister, the Queen, re-assigned me to fight against the Coalition.") RESCOAERADMSG8 _("...") RESCOAERADMSG9 _("But I couldn't take it anymore.") -RESCOAERADMSG10 _("Growing up, I was aware of how... unpopular my father was with the kingdom's population.") +RESCOAERADMSG10 _("Growing up, I was aware of how... unpopular my father was with the kingdom's populous.") RESCOAERADMSG11 _("Both my sister and I were at least somewhat familiar with the ways in which the King ruled his subjects.") RESCOAERADMSG12 _("It was only after some time serving under my sister did I truly realize how twisted her vision of her father's kingdom was.") RESCOAERADMSG13 _("Not only was she willing to embrace the most brutal methods of the King, she was fully willing to go even further.") -RESCOAERADMSG14 _("So I left. I gathered anyone who was would listen, and we fled south and hid from the Royalists.") +RESCOAERADMSG14 _("So I left. I gathered anyone who would listen and fled south, hiding from the Royalists.") /* Added if neither the Hellraisers or AMPHOS are Eradicated */ RESCOAERADADD1 _("I couldn't stand serving anyone, even my own sister, who had such sinister ambitions.") RESCOAERADADD2 _("How sinister?") RESCOAERADADD3 _("Case in point, Commander, she'll do anything to solidify her power.") RESCOAERADADD4 _("Even if it means killing thousands.") -RESCOAERADADD5 _("She'll eradicate anybody who won't serve her.") +RESCOAERADADD5 _("She'll eradicate anybody who won't yield to her.") RESCOAERADADD6 _("Not just the Coalition, but the Hellraisers and AMPHOS too.") RESCOAERADADD7 _("She'd wipe them out just to stay on the throne.") RESCOAERADMSG15 _("...") RESCOAERADMSG16 _("Commander, I think out of anyone, you've got the best shot at actually defeating the Royalists and dethroning my sister.") RESCOAERADMSG17 _("We've already come so far, and not even the Coalition could stop you.") -RESCOAERADMSG18 _("I think we might actually have a chance, but there's no turning back now.") +RESCOAERADMSG18 _("I think we might actually have a chance, there's no turning back now.") /* Coalition Alliance Message */ COAALLYMSG1 _("Well done, Commander!") @@ -488,22 +488,22 @@ ROYAMPERADMSG2 _("The AMPHOS hovercrafts may have been fast, but they weren't n ROYAMPERADMSG3 _("It won't be long before the same thing happens to you, Commander.") /* Hellraiser Eradication Message (From Royalists) */ -ROYHELERADMSG1 _("Did you really think those Hellraiser savages could protect you?") +ROYHELERADMSG1 _("Did you really think those savages could protect you?") ROYHELERADMSG2 _("They were nothing more than roaches, scurrying between the cliffs of their domain until my forces stomped them out.") -ROYHELERADMSG3 _("They meant nothing against the might of the Royalists.") +ROYHELERADMSG3 _("Made exmaple of by Royalist might.") /* Coalition Eradication Message (From Royalists) */ ROYCOAERADMSG1 _("And so falls the greatest menace to the kingdom!") ROYCOAERADMSG2 _("In the end, not even Max and his Coalition could stand against my might.") -ROYCOAERADMSG3 _("Do you still think you stand a chance against me now?") +ROYCOAERADMSG3 _("Do you still think you stand a chance against me?") /* Added to any message if the player has 1 non-Resistance ally left */ ROY1LEFTADD1 _("Your allies are growing thin, Commander.") -ROY1LEFTADD2 _("You should have realized that opposing me was futile from the start!") +ROY1LEFTADD2 _("You should have realized from the start that opposing me was futile!") /* Added to any message if the player has no non-Resistance allies left */ -ROY0LEFTADD1 _("No more allies to hide behind, Commander. It's just you and me.") -ROY0LEFTADD2 _("It's time for these games to end.") +ROY0LEFTADD1 _("No more allies for you to hide behind, Commander.") +ROY0LEFTADD2 _("Your end is upon you.") /* Coalition message about Royalist commander */ COACOMMANDERMSG1 _("Heads up, that Royalist commander is bad news.") @@ -528,24 +528,24 @@ AMPBEGMSG4 _("I repeat: the Royalists have betrayed AMPHOS. We'll take any and /* Royalist Negotiation Message */ ROYNEGOMSG1 _("Well, Commander. It looks like it's just you and me.") -ROYNEGOMSG2 _("...You know what, you might not be so bad.") -ROYNEGOMSG3 _("Inadvertently or not, you've destroyed many enemies of the Royalists; the Hellraisers, AMPHOS, even the Coalition.") +ROYNEGOMSG2 _("...You know what, you might not be so bad after all.") +ROYNEGOMSG3 _("Inadvertently or not, you've destroyed many enemies of the Royalists; the Hellraisers, AMPHOS, and even the Coalition.") ROYNEGOMSG4 _("...They're all gone now.") -ROYNEGOMSG5 _("So you know what? I'll extend an olive branch.") -ROYNEGOMSG6 _("Let's put down our arms and settle this peacefully.") -ROYNEGOMSG7 _("You stand down and give me the rest of my kingdom, and I'll let you go scott-free.") -ROYNEGOMSG8 _("And then you can back to wherever the hell you came from.") -ROYNEGOMSG9 _("A Royalist truck has been sent to begin negotiations, Commander. Let's end this here and now.") +ROYNEGOMSG5 _("In light of your commendable efforts, I extend the olive branch.") +ROYNEGOMSG6 _("Let's put down our arms and settle this like civilised beings.") +ROYNEGOMSG7 _("You stand down, give me the rest of my kingdom and I'll let you return, unscathed, from whence you came.") +ROYNEGOMSG8 _("Do not assist any remaining traitors, militant or civilian, to flee. And most importantly, do not ever return here.") +ROYNEGOMSG9 _("A Royalist truck has been sent to begin negotiations, Commander. See to it this ends now.") /* Royalist message if the player accepts negotiations */ -ROYAMBUMSG1 _("Did you really, TRULY believe that it would end this way?") -ROYAMBUMSG2 _("Hah! Not a chance!") -ROYAMBUMSG3 _("Oh come on, did you really think I'd let someone as dangerous as you in MY kingdom?") +ROYAMBUMSG1 _("Did you really, truly believe that I would allow it end that way?") +ROYAMBUMSG2 _("Have your conquests finally gotten the better of your conscious Commander?") +ROYAMBUMSG3 _("To think I'd let someone as dangerous as you in infest MY kingdom?") ROYAMBUMSG4 _("After all, not only have you massacred my subjects, but...") -ROYAMBUMSG5 _("You're also the bastard who killed my brother.") +ROYAMBUMSG5 _("You also murder the Prince.") ROYAMBUMSG6 _("...") -ROYAMBUMSG7 _("And what kind of Queen would I be if I let you live after that?") -ROYAMBUMSG8 _("Not a good one, that's for sure!") +ROYAMBUMSG7 _("What kind of Queen would I be if I weren't to avenge such a henious crime against the Kingdom?") +ROYAMBUMSG8 _("You have your response to negotiations, your demise shall be swift and merciless!") /* Royalist message doesn't fall for the fakeout */ ROYBTRYMSG1 _("I extend an olive branch and offer a peaceful solution, yet you still insist on fighting?") @@ -554,14 +554,14 @@ ROYBTRYMSG3 _("I bet James said something like that to you, too.") ROYBTRYMSG4 _("He was always quick to try to find a diplomatic ending.") ROYBTRYMSG5 _("But you didn't show him any mercy, did you?") ROYBTRYMSG6 _("In fact, you haven't spared a soul you've come across.") -ROYBTRYMSG7 _("Well, I guess we're pretty similar in that regard.") +ROYBTRYMSG7 _("It goes to show, we're very similar in that regard you and I.") ROYBTRYMSG8 _("...") ROYBTRYMSG9 _("But this, is MY kingdom.") ROYBTRYMSG10 _("And you have no place in it!") /* Resistance Assault Alert (When the Royalists target the player with an Assault) */ -RESALERTMSG1 _("Heads up, we've intercepted some Royalist radio transmissions indicating that they've prepared an all-out assault against us.") -RESALERTMSG2 _("Brace yourself, Commander. I think things are about to get nasty.") +RESALERTMSG1 _("Heads up Commander, we've intercepted Royalist radio transmissions indicating that they've prepared an all-out assault against us.") +RESALERTMSG2 _("Brace yourself, I think things are about to get nasty.") /* AMPHOS Assault Alert */ AMPALERTMSG1 _("We have detected signs that a large Royalist force amassing within their base.") @@ -570,7 +570,7 @@ AMPALERTMSG3 _("Any assistance in dealing with this would be greatly appreciate /* Hellraiser Assault Alert */ HELALERTMSG1 _("Commander, we've spotted more Royalists heading towards us!") -HELALERTMSG2 _("We must hold the line here! Incinerate any Royalist that dares to march upon us!") +HELALERTMSG2 _("We must hold the line here! Aid us and incinerate any Royalist that dares to march upon us!") /* Coalition Assault Alert */ COAALERTMSG1 _("Hey, Commander! We've got intel that suggests the Royalists are about to hit us with a huge assault.") @@ -578,28 +578,28 @@ COAALERTMSG2 _("We don't know what they're bringing, but knowing the Queen, it' COAALERTMSG3 _("If you can send some guys to help us defend our bases, we'd surely appreciate it.") /* Phase 3 Message (Only if the player has any allies) */ -ROYPHASE3MSG1 _("That's enough, Commander.") +ROYPHASE3MSG1 _("This is enough, Commander.") ROYPHASE3MSG2 _("You've become a nuisance I can no longer ignore.") -ROYPHASE3MSG3 _("So I hope you're VERY proud of yourself.") -ROYPHASE3MSG4 _("You'd best get ready for what I have in store for you...") -ROYPHASE3MSG5 _("Because for you, it's all downhill from here.") +ROYPHASE3MSG3 _("You must be VERY proud of yourself.") +ROYPHASE3MSG4 _("Ready you and your ally's forces for what I have in store for you.") +ROYPHASE3MSG5 _("Because for you all, there is no pardon for your actions.") /* Royalist base under attack */ ROYATTACKMSG1 _("What do you think you're doing?") -ROYATTACKMSG2 _("You're attacking me?") -ROYATTACKMSG3 _("Pfft. That's really cute.") -ROYATTACKMSG4 _("If only you stood any chance!") +ROYATTACKMSG2 _("You're acually trying to attack me!?") +ROYATTACKMSG3 _("Your fool hardiness has worked for you up until now.") +ROYATTACKMSG4 _("If only you stood any chance.") ROYATTACKMSG5 _("No matter how strong you become, you'll never be able to stand against the Royalists!") ROYATTACKMSG6 _("You're hopeless!") -ROYATTACKMSG7 _("...You hear that? Hopeless!") +ROYATTACKMSG7 _("...You hear that, utterly hopeless!") /* Royalist base under attack (Player has Eradicated all other factions) */ ROYERADATTACKMSG1 _("What do you think you're doing?") -ROYERADATTACKMSG2 _("You think you can destroy us like you've done to all the others?") +ROYERADATTACKMSG2 _("You think you can destroy me like you've done to all the others?") ROYERADATTACKMSG3 _("Hah! Ha... ha ha ha!") -ROYERADATTACKMSG4 _("You're quite tough, Commander, I'll give you that!") +ROYERADATTACKMSG4 _("You've proven how ruthless you can be Commander, I'll give you that.") ROYERADATTACKMSG5 _("But you're either stupid or crazy if you think you can defeat ME.") -ROYERADATTACKMSG6 _("I am NOT to be pushed around! I'm the Queen!") +ROYERADATTACKMSG6 _("I am NOT to be pushed around! I'm the Queen!") ROYERADATTACKMSG7 _("I've triumphed over every foe before you, and I'll do the same to you!") ROYERADATTACKMSG8 _("You're nothing special! You will KNEEL before me.") ROYERADATTACKMSG9 _("And when I'm done with you, you'll be nothing more than a bad memory!") @@ -625,7 +625,7 @@ COARESPONMSG3 _("It's only a matter of time until victory is ours!") /* Resistance Response */ RESRESPONMSG1 _("...") -RESRESPONMSG2 _("We're almost done. We just gotta mount one last push to clear the remaining Royalist bases.") +RESRESPONMSG2 _("We're almost done. We just got to mount one final offense to clear the remaining Royalist bases.") RESRESPONMSG3 _("We've come this far, Commander. We can't let up now.") /* Royalist Outer Base Eradicated (Player has Eradicated all other factions) */ @@ -635,9 +635,9 @@ ROYERADOUTERMSG3 _("I-I'm the Queen! This kingdom belongs to me!") ROYERADOUTERMSG4 _("N-Not you.") ROYERADOUTERMSG5 _("ME!") ROYERADOUTERMSG6 _("I've come to far to lose now...") -ROYERADOUTERMSG7 _("A-And I WON'T let you turn MY kingdom into a playground for your psychotic k-killing sprees!") +ROYERADOUTERMSG7 _("I-I WON'T let you turn MY kingdom into a playground for your psychotic k-killing sprees!") ROYERADOUTERMSG8 _("Do you h-hear me?") -ROYERADOUTERMSG9 _("Y-Your rampage has come to its end!") +ROYERADOUTERMSG9 _("Y-Your rampage has met its end!") /* Campaign 1 Mission Briefing text */