D9 validate

Author: salixa

Day 09/001_25493836_185014c.xml

@@ -34,9 +34,9 @@
     必ズ　シトメマス<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    Yes.<end_line>
-    This Time, They Will Not Escape.<end_line>
-    We Will Bring Them Down Without Fail.<end_line>
+    Yes. This Time,<end_line>
+    They Will Not Escape.<end_line>
+    We Will Bring Them Down.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@
     自警団の人に引き渡さないと<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    Don't bring them down!<end_line>
-    Capture them. We still need to hand<end_line>
+    Hey, we can't do that!<end_line>
+    We still need to hand<end_line>
     them over to the Vigilante Corps.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
@@ -90,8 +90,8 @@
   </female>
   <ascii>
     What?<end_line>
-    Are you still angry about the<end_line>
-    time you were captured?<end_line>
+    Are you still angry about<end_line>
+    the time we were captured?<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
     Mm<three_dots> You're right.<end_line>
-    I do not want to be the same as them.<end_line>
+    I am not a savage like them.<end_line>
     Anyway, I shall let them live.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
     Of course you will!<end_line>
-    We still need to hand the over<end_line>
+    We still need to hand them over<end_line>
     to the Vigilante Corps.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
     Don't worry.<end_line>
-    Once I'm down with them,<end_line>
+    Once I'm done with them,<end_line>
     there won't be anything left.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@
   </female>
   <ascii>
     That's why I'm telling you!<end_line>
-    The Vigilante Corps will be there too.<end_line>
+    The Vigilante Corps will be there.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
@@ -391,6 +391,11 @@
       落ちついて行こう<end_line>
     </sjis>
   </female>
+  <ascii>
+    Please, I'm begging you.<end_line>
+    Don't take this too far.<end_line>
+    Let's all calm down.<end_line>
+  </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
   <partner name="rufeel">
@@ -402,6 +407,11 @@
     あの人たち今度会ったら<end_line>
     絶対に許しませんわ！<end_line>
   </sjis>
+  <ascii>
+    That's right!<end_line>
+    I will not let them get<end_line>
+    off easy this time!<end_line>
+  </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
   <partner name="rufeel">
@@ -420,6 +430,10 @@
       あんまりムチャなことしないでよ<end_line>
     </sjis>
   </female>
+  <ascii>
+    I know you're angry,<end_line>
+    but don't go too crazy.<end_line>
+  </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
   <partner name="rufeel">
@@ -430,6 +444,10 @@
     安心してください<end_line>
     命まで取る気はありませんわ<end_line>
   </sjis>
+  <ascii>
+    Rest assured,<end_line>
+    I wasn't planning on killing them.<end_line>
+  </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
   <partner name="rufeel">
@@ -441,6 +459,11 @@
     捕まえて自警団の人に<end_line>
     引き渡さないと<end_line>
   </sjis>
+  <ascii>
+    Of course not!<end_line>
+    We have to be able to hand them<end_line>
+    over to the Vigilante Corps.<end_line>
+  </ascii> 
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
   <partner name="rufeel">
@@ -451,6 +474,10 @@
     あらら、そうでしたわ<end_line>
     何か良い手を考えないといけませんわ<end_line>
   </sjis>
+  <ascii>
+    Oh my, I almost forgot.<end_line>
+    I must think of something else then.<end_line>
+  </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
   <partner name="rufeel">
@@ -472,8 +499,8 @@
     </sjis>
   </female>
   <ascii>
-    I'm begging you,<end_line>
-    don't take this too far.<end_line>
+    Please, I'm begging you.<end_line>
+    Don't take this too far.<end_line>
     Let's all calm down.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>

Day 09/004_25496796_1850cdc.xml

@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
     ならないわね<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    So we're back to searching again, huh.<end_line>
+    Back to searching again, huh.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@
     外で待ってるからね<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    Then, we're leaving once you're ready.<end_line>
+    We're leaving once you're ready.<end_line>
     We'll be waiting outside.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>

Day 09/005_24609756_17783dc.xml

@@ -55,9 +55,9 @@
 		扉のカギがあいてたみたいだな<end_line>
 	</sjis>
   <ascii>
-    Recently, it's been so dangerous that<end_line>
-    they've made it so you can't get in.<end_line>
-    Looks like the door wasn't locked.<end_line>
+    Recently, it's been so dangerous<end_line>
+    that they've sealed off the door.<end_line>
+    It wasn't locked before.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>

Day 09/006_25498716_185145c.xml

@@ -140,8 +140,8 @@
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
     It is.<end_line>
-    It's dangerous, so it's best if<end_line>
-    you stopped gathering materials there.<end_line>
+    It would be best if you<end_line>
+    stopped going there.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
@@ -172,8 +172,8 @@
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
     It is.<end_line>
-    It's dangerous, so it's best if<end_line>
-    you stopped gathering materials there.<end_line>
+    It would be best if you<end_line>
+    stopped going there.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>

Day 09/008_24637644_177f0cc.xml

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
     I didn't run.<end_line>
-    I was telling everyone in the village<end_line>
-    to evacuate. Really!<end_line>
+    I was telling everyone in<end_line>
+    the village to evacuate. Really!<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>

Day 09/009_24634012_177e29c.xml

@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@
     集中してて大変なの<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    Lately, my mother has been concentrating<end_line>
-    only on finding anamazing <end_line>
-    Craftknight, and it's been tough.<end_line>
+    Lately, my mother has been focused<end_line>
+    only on finding amazing<end_line>
+    Craftknights, and it's been tough.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@
       買う<end_line>
     </sjis>
     <ascii>
-      Buy
+      Buy<end_line>
     </ascii> 
   </option>
   <option>

Day 09/021_24594668_17748ec.xml

@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@
     飛ぶように売れて嬉しいわ<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    The Strays have been acting up recently.<end_line>
-    Weapons and armor are just<end_line>
+    Thanks to those Strays,<end_line>
+    weapons and armor are just<end_line>
     flying right off the shelves!<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@
     あぶなくってしょうがない<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    Such a dangerous person might be here.<end_line>
-    Of course it's dangerous.<end_line>
+    A dangerous person might be here.<end_line>
+    I can't help being scared.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>

Day 09/025_24607436_1777acc.xml

@@ -16,8 +16,7 @@
     すごいわ<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    So you defeated this Red Wing<end_line>
-    in all those rumors.<end_line>
+    You defeated Red Wing!<end_line>
     That's amazing!<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
@@ -39,9 +38,8 @@
     すごいなぁ<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    To think you could defeat the Red Wing<end_line>
-    in all those rumors<three_dots><end_line>
-    You're amazing!<end_line>
+    So you defeated Red Wing<three_dots><end_line>
+    Impressive!<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
@@ -52,10 +50,9 @@
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
     That must be why my daughter<end_line>
-    fell fell for you<three_dots><end_line>
+    fell for you<three_dots><end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
-###OtomeSecret
 <dialogue>
   <info box="simple">
   <sjis>

Day 09/027_24617932_177a3cc.xml

@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
     By now, they've turned into a demon,<end_line>
-    no longer recognizable as a human child.<end_line>
-    Or so I heard.<end_line>
+    no longer recognizable as<end_line>
+    a human child. Or so I heard.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
@@ -42,7 +42,6 @@
     Miiii<three_dots><end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
-###FounderOfProsban
 <dialogue>
   <info box="simple">
   <sjis>

Day 09/028_24616188_1779cfc.xml

@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@
     ヤバイって、実感したよ<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    I've personally learned that you both<end_line>
-    having weapons is dangerous.<end_line>
+    I've personally learned that you<end_line>
+    both having weapons is dangerous.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>
@@ -39,9 +39,9 @@
     　　　　　　武器破壊推進委員会<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    When fighting a human opponent, consider<end_line>
-    winning by breaking their weapon.<end_line>
-          Committee for Weapon Destruction<end_line>
+    When fighting a human opponent,<end_line>
+    breaking their weapon is a win.<end_line>
+    Committee for Weapon Destruction<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>

Day 09/031_24611964_1778c7c.xml

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
 		道具屋からのお知らせでした<end_line>
 	</sjis>
   <ascii>
-    If you're unsatisfied with your stats,<end_line>
+    If you want to boost your stats,<end_line>
     please equip an accessory.<end_line>
     A message from our shop.<end_line>
   </ascii>

Day 09/035_24613660_177931c.xml

@@ -12,12 +12,11 @@
 		キミがたおされるアカバネ<end_line>
 	</sjis>
   <ascii>
-    Hey, let's play pretend!<end_line>
-    I'll be the one who defeats Red Wing,<end_line>
+    Hey, let's play pretend! I'll be<end_line>
+    the one who defeats Red Wing,<end_line>
     you can be Red Wing.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
-###Awkward
 <dialogue>
 	<info box="simple">
 	<sjis>

Day 09/043_25504748_1852bec.xml

@@ -680,8 +680,9 @@
     もうこの近くにはいないと思いますわ<end_line>
   </sjis>
   <ascii>
-    Master said it must have been a trap.<end_line>
-    I don't think they will have lingered.<end_line>
+    Master said it was a trap.<end_line>
+    I'm sure they must have<end_line>
+    moved on already.<end_line>
   </ascii>
 </dialogue>
 <dialogue>