diff --git a/src/pages/ctfing.astro b/src/pages/ctfing.astro
index 54e1842..11926da 100644
--- a/src/pages/ctfing.astro
+++ b/src/pages/ctfing.astro
@@ -22,15 +22,13 @@ const ctfWriteupNames = new Set(
     <h1>My CTF page</h1>
     <hr />
     <p>
-      As a programming hobbyist, I believe that Capture the Flag competitions,
-      or CTFs, are the greatest discipline of computer science. CTF competitions
-      involve working together with a team to exploit vulnerablites in programs
-      or computer systems to find a "flag", a specific text string that serves
-      as the answer to the challenge.
+      I sometimes play CTF. CTF competitions involve working together with a
+      team to exploit vulnerablites in programs or computer systems to find a
+      "flag", a specific text string that serves as the answer to the challenge.
     </p>
     <p>
-      Part of my love for competing in CTFs comes from having fun with my team.
-      My close high school friends <a href="https://rluo.dev">Ruien</a>, <a
+      Most of the fun from competing in CTFs comes from my team. My close high
+      school friends <a href="https://rluo.dev">Ruien</a>, <a
         href="https://bithole.dev">Adrian</a
       >, <a href="https://kot.pink">Kevin</a> and I form the CTF team <a
         href="https://ctftime.org/team/207689">asmhole</a
@@ -38,7 +36,7 @@ const ctfWriteupNames = new Set(
     </p>
     <ul>
       <li>
-        Went to DEF CON 31 together! We won 1st place for Starphish CTF and a
+        Went to DEF CON 31/32 together! We won 1st place for Starphish CTF and a
         Flipper Zero
       </li>
       <li>